i started this one in the last days of school and finished it about yesterday...written for pain....

[55blank55]

"Pain"
To fall upon my bed of lies.
To sit and wait.
To dream and die.
My words are strewn across with pen.
My life on edge of where and when.
This nights on fire with my hurt.
This burning hides beneath my smirk.
Scolded I am slain undone.
Yet through it all I'm having fun.
Enjoy the hurt
and love the pain
it's all alone
and always same.
I'm kept alive
not

Comments

[sporks_rock]

I remember when you first began writing this one.
I love it. =]

And all i wanna hear is the message beep, my dreams they're kinda crazy cus i dont get sleep, no....

[55blank55]

lol, really?

thx...i personally think its too short...but if you say so....

Re: And all i wanna hear is the message beep, my dreams they're kinda crazy cus i dont get sleep, no

[sporks_rock]

Well, it's not about length, it's about getting your point across in an artistic & poetic manner.

Re: And all i wanna hear is the message beep, my dreams they're kinda crazy cus i dont get sleep, no

[55blank55]

i suppose your right....

[55blank55]

you like it?

[0hsocliche]

my dear.

you amaze me.