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"Bit by Bit" - lea_hazel (PG-13)

Apr 28, 2006 16:02

Title: Bit by Bit.
Author: lea_hazel, AKA lamda_fic.
Characters/Pairings: Lilly/Veronica, various.
Rating: PG-13.
Word Count: 3,383.
Spoilers: S1, no S2 spoilers that I can think of.
Summary: Revelation, confession and rediscovery, five things that Lilly Kane never got to do. Femmeslash.

( Bit by Bit )

round two, lea_hazel

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lea_hazel April 29 2006, 08:36:59 UTC

Thank you! I'm very flattered. I've struggled with my Lilly voice before, and humor was always my weakest genre, so it's gratifying to hear I nailed both.

kitty_ryan April 29 2006, 05:53:21 UTC

*laughs* Brilliant, love. Veronica's voice is still in my head after reading this. I love all the details you've managed to cram into the dialogue--so many, and yet it's not overloaded at all. And, as person above said, it's hillarious. It really does amaze me how well you cross fandoms.

lea_hazel April 29 2006, 08:38:31 UTC

I love all the details you've managed to cram into the dialogue--so many, and yet it's not overloaded at all.

I was debating on whether or not to include any Duncan/Meg references, but decided against it.

It really does amaze me how well you cross fandoms.

Multifandom writing is still relatively new to me, so I'm getting used to the idea.

anonymous May 5 2006, 00:23:05 UTC

::tears:: this was PERFECT! its exactly how i would have loved to see things go if lilly had lived...

there is this part of me that thinks that lilly really did love and care for veronica...and you captured it sooooo beautifully...

yeay! that was GREAT fic!

lea_hazel May 5 2006, 06:17:00 UTC

Thank you!

dead_serious January 24 2007, 05:03:17 UTC

I have been SEARCHING for this piece for DAYS!

i am sooo in love with it, it is perfect in every way!

its seems like i've lost my brain...i can't for coherent thoughts, this was sooo amazing!

thanks for writing great fic!

lea_hazel January 24 2007, 09:36:01 UTC

Wow! Thanks! That's seriously high praise, there.

crystalizedsoul February 20 2007, 10:33:40 UTC

I found this fic a long time ago and its stuck in my head ever since. Then when I was over at vm_fic's website I realized it was a "five things" piece so then I came over here till I found the title in the memories. Basically, probably the same things dead_serious was doing a month ago. Anyway, I absolutly adore this. It's so beautiful and perfect and unlike other fics I've read where Lilly survives, it gives an actual future for her where she doesn't become a huge bitch and betray Veronica and doesn't die some horrible death from drug overdose or something similar. This is just perfectly in character and so, just HERATRBREAKING since she's never gonna get the chance to live it out. Great fic!!!

lea_hazel March 15 2007, 18:56:58 UTC

Thanks! I know, even in fic, happy endings for Lilly are in short supply.