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eleventh hour - lennalie (R)

Jul 09, 2006 23:18

Title: eleventh hour
Author: lennalie (lenny)
Characters/Pairings: Logan, Veronica
Rating: R (for language)
Word Count: 2660
Spoilers: seasons 1 and 2 in their entirety
Summary: five times he didn't save her.
Notes: This is my first VM fic, and the first piece I've written in a couple of years. I really don't know what I'm getting myself into, but ( Read more... )

round three, lennalie

Comments 6

vintagejoy July 10 2006, 05:49:54 UTC

Wow. This was gorgeous. I love your Logan and the flight-of-ideas of his inner monologue. I loved the imagery too, I could pick out so many lines that were just exquisite in their description. Absolutely spot-on characterisation which is often the hardest thing to get right in first fics, so I can't wait to read more VM fic from you!

lennalie July 10 2006, 08:02:26 UTC

thank you so much! i was quite intimidated to post this, and it's really encouraging to get feedback. i'm glad to know that the style worked... my beta is an english major and i was driving her crazy with all of the commas!

thank you again for responding!

starry_laa July 18 2006, 12:21:53 UTC

I really like the style of this. The thought and the affirmation in brackets- this was written with raw emotion. I wasn't sure what the last scene was at first, then I realised it was the finale scene- and that too was beautifully done. Loved it!

lennalie July 31 2006, 19:12:38 UTC

thank you very much!

fairy_tale_echo July 29 2006, 21:47:28 UTC

I LOVE FIVE THINGS FIC! I wanted to do this challenge but I couldn't see a way of making it work. And here you are, with the exact way it works. This was just amazing. The tone-the atmosphere. I love the way you kept Logan consistent in each piece even though every one is so different. I can't even pick out my favorite lines, because the whole thing just fits together seamelessly. From the concept to the execution, this is AWESOME. Have you posted this over at veronicamarsfic? If not, you really need to, because this deserves a whole lot of attention...and you deserve encouragement to write more, more, more! :)

lennalie July 31 2006, 19:19:29 UTC

why thank you! i really, really appreciate your comments. i was very scared to post this, and all of the encouragement i've recieved has been amazing. i posted this at veronicamarsfic when i posted it here, and they were very supportive as well. ;)

so thank you again! :)