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[5thofnovember]

TITLE: Seven Deadly Sins (Pride_2)
PAIRING: Jack/Elizabeth
RATING: PG-13
SUMMARY: The second part of "Pride", Jack is here, as promised. There's also a bit of an interlude of random Elizabeth character analysis/introspection. Ummm, that's about it.

Comments

[anonymous]

I really loved the line at the beginning- " It's part comforting, part endearing, and all Jack; the last bit is what she's missed the most."

Really awesome work on this "Sin" series-it's so refreshing to read something with this much thought put into it :D

[5thofnovember]

Thank you anonymous commenter person!

[twinni_two]

I love the last line: "Come closer and I'll whisper it too you". Sounds the exact sort of thing Jack would say to tease Elizabeth. Like the "persuade me" scene.

[5thofnovember]

That's what I thought, too. Am glad you liked it.

[keechakatt]

Really nice work. :) I look forward to reading more!

[5thofnovember]

And I look forward to writing it. :]

[5thofnovember]

Wow, thank you so much. I didn't know I had secret lurking readers. XD Makes me feel all warm inside. Especially intelligent, well-spoken lurking readers that prompt me to make conversation. That's even better.

It's very true, Elizabeth can't escape her upbringing, and it's funny, that this is the thing she's trying to escape the most.

[hellokittygirl6]

that was great! i really enjoyed reading that.

"The line between fantasy and reality had been so blurred, so eroded by stories, by kohl, and sand between her toes"

some reason...i really loved that line.

well done! look forward to your wrath!! :D xx

[5thofnovember]

Thanks!