A Lesson in Romantics part 3

Jan 15, 2012 21:38

Title: A Lesson in Romantics 3

Pairing: Selena Gomez and Demi Lovato

Rating: M for adult themes

Disclaimer: I own nothing, receive no profit... Selena Gomez and Demi Lovato are their own people. This is complete fiction... probably... I guess. Believe what you want to believe.

Authors Note: So, after completing this chapter months ago my lap top ( Read more... )

demi/selena, rpfs, femslash

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WOOO! amazingwaffles January 16 2012, 22:34:47 UTC
YESSSSS!!! OMG ive missed you! again, another awesome chapter. funny as heel and sexy too! seriously the whole "starring role...with a monologue and everything" was hysterical! and i can totally see it happening.

Thank you angel with the USB drive :) great job! glad you're back!

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Re: WOOO! 5x5barista January 17 2012, 03:17:04 UTC
Hey, I remember you! Thanks for reading, and yes I had a blast writing those lines. In my head that scene just felt so... 'hollywood jargon' ya know?

Anyway, it's good to be back and chapter four is definitely not going to take a year to be written I PROMISE!

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xxalynaj January 17 2012, 06:23:35 UTC
ah, the perfect end. :) i hated how in the second part, you were soo descriptive and then towards the end right when the sexiness was about to start, you ended it. i was like, "NOO!!" haha! i like this ending a lot better. :) your writing is really descriptive and wonderful, very realistic. i could picture our two gorgeous gals doing this because it didn't seem so off the wall. great job!

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5x5barista January 17 2012, 11:19:45 UTC
Thanks so much! But it's not the end, I've got at least one more chapter for these two. I just realized that there isn't really a plot to this series, just silly moments of awkward intercourse. I think I'm okay with that though.

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xxalynaj January 17 2012, 19:58:48 UTC
even better! haha, i love the awkward intercourse :P

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5x5barista January 19 2012, 12:01:41 UTC
Haha, thanks! Yes chapter 4 is already outlined and the dialogue has been established for a while now so hopefully I can get it up within the month. I know, 2 updates within weeks of each other? Highly uncharacteristic for me but, new years resolutions and all... :)

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robbirmingham January 17 2012, 18:39:10 UTC
Oh. My. God. uh, I'm still drooling so I'll be back in a sec...

RIGHT THEN! I had to catch up, from part one, to now; and just, omfg. You're a genius. Just, genius genius genius genius. Just the right blend of haughty and humor; truly amazing! Like, words; cannot, I'll get back to you. Drooling, still.

You're brilliant!

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5x5barista January 19 2012, 12:07:21 UTC
Well, thanks! Brilliant is actually one of my favorite words. I'm happy you liked it, especially because I'm so not used to writing sex scenes. I'm very dialogue centered -like with a script- so this was a challenge and I'm really glad it went over well.

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5x5barista January 26 2012, 02:47:37 UTC
Yeah I like to keep their interactions at a good balance between real and entertaining. Gracias for reading and commenting, hope this wasn't too distracting at work :)

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