So here is my secret Santa fic, I have an idea who this fic is for, but I cant be certain.......anyway I really hope she likes it and so do all of you
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first of all, god bless elke for giving you such an awesome prompt. second of all, THANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOU for writing this epic piece and check out how long it ia *rolls around in jane fic* AMAAAAAAAZING!
i know you don't write AU bb, but this has completely blown me away <3 also i totally love how you called coco dr dashing. im sure he'd approve so hard! :D
He smiled at his own genius, his perfect teeth glinting in the moonlight, pouting pink lips poking out below his over sized hood that hid his identity so well. omg PERFECTION. and i love how he's wearing his hoodie, every superhero needs a costume :DDD
He glanced down at himself sill in awe at how his muscles rippled and strained against the dark leather, he had never looked so good in his life. Trailing a hand down his stomach, bouncing it over his cut abs he groaned.
omg first paragraph and im already dead. cody in leather *____________*and those abs *fap fap fap*
he would spend hours in front of the mirror looking, touching every part of his perfect body, he’d show them
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He attended every social function, often hosting them himself, he was the epitome of style and confidence. Everyone loved Randy, he was surrounded by a crowd of adoring socialites where ever he went, but through it all, though all his opulence he managed to remain humble. He did a lot of work for charity and was always trying to use his millions for the greater good of the city. well well daddy, aren't you just the sweetest bruce wayne reincarnation :')
Cody realised that he was head over heels in love with Randy Orton. :DDDDDDDDDDD
It was the first time in Cody’s life that he felt someone really cared about him and he enjoyed that. OMG POOR BB ;____________; come coco, let me put you safely in my pocket and feed you nuggets <3
Cody’s stomach had done a flip as he saw Randy’s body leaning in, painfully slow for a kiss. JANE YOU HAVE ME AT THE EDGE OF MY SEAT
Dr Dashing’s logo was obvious! but OF COURSE dr dashing would have a logo <33333
Shaking the thoughts out of his head The Viper pulled his snake skin mask over his stormy
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Gahh......ikr??? whenever I think of super hero Randy I always think of him as Batman, it just works so damn well <33333
Poor little Coco, he really does just need someone to look after him!! <3
that kiss killed me too.....damn you Sam!!!! lol
I really want to see their costumes too! I bet they're amazing!! :D
I'm so glad you liked it bb, it really could have gone so terrible wrong lololol. Of course it had to end that way, they need to be together forever <333333
Thank you hun!! I dont really ever do AU so I was a little worried about this, but it seems to have gone down quite well :D Mmmmmmm I'd love to see Randy in green snake skin leather :D
Even though I've tried to tell you irl I'm not sure I can express how much I loved this fic! I knew I would like it when you started tell me about it but because super heroes totally aren't my thing I wasn't sure it would impact on me as much as it has, but it did! There's just something so completely perfect about both their alter egos and the relationship between them...this fic in the wrong hands could seem so stilted and forced but it feels totally real the way you've written it.
First of all, their names - Dr Dashing and The Viper - SO PERFECT. I bet Cody would LOVE that!
He smiled at his own genius, his perfect teeth glinting in the moonlight, pouting pink lips poking out below his over sized hood that hid his identity so well. He glanced down at himself sill in awe at how his muscles rippled and strained against the dark leather, he had never looked so good in his life. Trailing a hand down his stomach, bouncing it over his cut abs he groaned. This had become a bit of a ritual for him, admiring himself like this in his suit.
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“What are you doing Cody?” The Viper whispered, staring into Dr Dashing’s eyes he saw the eerie glow fade until there was nothing but intense ice blue, the blue of his Cody. “In don’t know what I’m doing” Cody said quietly, actually looking at Randy like a real person for the first time that night. Awww that's so sad :(
Just let it go” Randy whispered when he broke the kiss “yes it’s fucked up, and no, I have no idea what’s going on or what it going to happen.......but please, for me, just let me have you right now” the desperation in Randy’s voice and eyes took Cody by surprise and before he knew what he was doing he was kissing Randy back hard, his tongue pushing through those hot lips as he laid Randy down and straddled his hips. Yes....YES!!! You've both waited long enough, just give in!!! OMG.
Randy was like an animal, he all but ripped Cody’s tight leather suit off, leaving him open and naked. He pawed and scratched at Cody’s flawless skin, marking it, making it his and Cody let him. He let Randy mark him in a way that no one
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Poor Coco, he never meant for any of this <33333 I'm glad you feel sorry for him, thats totally where I was going with that coz Randy has to fall in love :D
I can just imagine Randy totally losing it with him, it's been so long and they both want it so much O_O
I can just see them being totally filthy up on that roof coz they can both still hide behind their alter egos, just really go for it O_O
thank you bb, I'm so glad you liked it!!! I was scared lol <333333333333
I'm so glad bb, because I really was winging it!! I dont really know enough about superheros/super villains to write something like this, but I just tried to take what I did know and work from there lol. <3333333333
I would hope that Cody would love how I described him and he knows his shit so thats hard lol.
I wanted him to be totally evil, but for there to be something about him that Randy could fall in love with. Cody had to still be there somewhere or I dont think someone as good as Randy could ever love him.
The balcony killed me.......poor bbs, they just needed to kiss and maybe none of this would have happened lol.
I'm glad you liked the fight scene coz i had no idea what I was doing at all :D
Superhero Orton & Cody as the baddy? Honestly, I would of thought it'd be the other way around but after reading this I can't imagine it any other way. Dr. Dashing indeed. I LOVE Cody's split personality in this, it reminds me a lot of how he is with his wrestling. He's got his dashing gig going on stage, but we get the real, sweet him whenever he's out of the ring & breaking kayfabe.
most people see it that way round too, but idk, I guess I've always seen Cody as the more scheming and manipulative of the two so he works so well for super villain :D
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i know you don't write AU bb, but this has completely blown me away <3 also i totally love how you called coco dr dashing. im sure he'd approve so hard! :D
He smiled at his own genius, his perfect teeth glinting in the moonlight, pouting pink lips poking out below his over sized hood that hid his identity so well.
omg PERFECTION. and i love how he's wearing his hoodie, every superhero needs a costume :DDD
He glanced down at himself sill in awe at how his muscles rippled and strained against the dark leather, he had never looked so good in his life. Trailing a hand down his stomach, bouncing it over his cut abs he groaned.
omg first paragraph and im already dead. cody in leather *____________*and those abs *fap fap fap*
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well well daddy, aren't you just the sweetest bruce wayne reincarnation :')
Cody realised that he was head over heels in love with Randy Orton.
:DDDDDDDDDDD
It was the first time in Cody’s life that he felt someone really cared about him and he enjoyed that.
OMG POOR BB ;____________; come coco, let me put you safely in my pocket and feed you nuggets <3
Cody’s stomach had done a flip as he saw Randy’s body leaning in, painfully slow for a kiss.
JANE YOU HAVE ME AT THE EDGE OF MY SEAT
Dr Dashing’s logo was obvious!
but OF COURSE dr dashing would have a logo <33333
Shaking the thoughts out of his head The Viper pulled his snake skin mask over his stormy ( ... )
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Poor little Coco, he really does just need someone to look after him!! <3
that kiss killed me too.....damn you Sam!!!! lol
I really want to see their costumes too! I bet they're amazing!! :D
I'm so glad you liked it bb, it really could have gone so terrible wrong lololol. Of course it had to end that way, they need to be together forever <333333
thank you bb <333333333
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Loved this AU. Loved Cody's inner anguish, I felt for him!
And I just wanted to say, Randy's costume was perfection.
Great job!
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Mmmmmmm I'd love to see Randy in green snake skin leather :D
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First of all, their names - Dr Dashing and The Viper - SO PERFECT. I bet Cody would LOVE that!
He smiled at his own genius, his perfect teeth glinting in the moonlight, pouting pink lips poking out below his over sized hood that hid his identity so well. He glanced down at himself sill in awe at how his muscles rippled and strained against the dark leather, he had never looked so good in his life. Trailing a hand down his stomach, bouncing it over his cut abs he groaned. This had become a bit of a ritual for him, admiring himself like this in his suit. ( ... )
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“In don’t know what I’m doing” Cody said quietly, actually looking at Randy like a real person for the first time that night.
Awww that's so sad :(
Just let it go” Randy whispered when he broke the kiss “yes it’s fucked up, and no, I have no idea what’s going on or what it going to happen.......but please, for me, just let me have you right now” the desperation in Randy’s voice and eyes took Cody by surprise and before he knew what he was doing he was kissing Randy back hard, his tongue pushing through those hot lips as he laid Randy down and straddled his hips.
Yes....YES!!! You've both waited long enough, just give in!!! OMG.
Randy was like an animal, he all but ripped Cody’s tight leather suit off, leaving him open and naked. He pawed and scratched at Cody’s flawless skin, marking it, making it his and Cody let him. He let Randy mark him in a way that no one ( ... )
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I'm glad you feel sorry for him, thats totally where I was going with that coz Randy has to fall in love :D
I can just imagine Randy totally losing it with him, it's been so long and they both want it so much O_O
I can just see them being totally filthy up on that roof coz they can both still hide behind their alter egos, just really go for it O_O
thank you bb, I'm so glad you liked it!!! I was scared lol
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I would hope that Cody would love how I described him and he knows his shit so thats hard lol.
I wanted him to be totally evil, but for there to be something about him that Randy could fall in love with. Cody had to still be there somewhere or I dont think someone as good as Randy could ever love him.
The balcony killed me.......poor bbs, they just needed to kiss and maybe none of this would have happened lol.
I'm glad you liked the fight scene coz i had no idea what I was doing at all :D
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I LOVE Cody's split personality in this, it reminds me a lot of how he is with his wrestling. He's got his dashing gig going on stage, but we get the real, sweet him whenever he's out of the ring & breaking kayfabe.
YOU. ARE. AWESOME. Thanks for writing. :)
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Thank you very much for reading and enjoying!! :D
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