Worse and Better, NC-17

[6reen6ables6irl]

Title: Worse and Better
Rating: NC-17 for language
Characters/Pairing: Karofsky, Karofsky/Kurt one-sided
Word Count: 2527
Spoilers: Never Been Kissed
Summary: Karofsky is angry and confused. Unbetaed.
WARNING: This story contains A LOT of offensive and inflammatory language used to describe homosexuality. This language in this story is intended to be in

Comments

Perfect!

[anonymous]

Love it! Loved Karofsky's reactions to kissing Kurt, for once getting past the anger and just thinking about what he's doing. And getting to read an inner monologue during dinner was absolutely fabulous.

I'm pleased that you used Ms. P to help him, that she can help the students with serious things.

Re: Perfect!

[6reen6ables6irl]

Thanks!
Yeah, I really like to do inner monologues. Also dream sequences. Whenever I write a fic it's a fifty-fifty chance of either one happening...

[roseredmisery]

you should post this on kurtofsky_fic comm :)

[6reen6ables6irl]

Hmmm...
Perhaps I shall... :D

[boysinperil]

This was great! I loved the conversation with Emma. "Whoa. Magneto is gay?" actually made me laugh out loud a little.

[6reen6ables6irl]

Thanks so much!
YAY I MADE SOMEONE LAUGH *LIFE'S MISSION ACCOMPLISHED* :DDDD

[6reen6ables6irl]

Thank you so much! <3 <3 <3 :DDD
That was partly why I wrote it, to settle my own feelings about this week's ep. There's some conflict in the fandom right now between Kurtofsky shippers and people who are angry that Kurt's first kiss got taken away in a nonconsensual manner. I just wanted to explore Karofsky's own conflict about everything.

[gilina]

That was an excellent story.Dave's perspective felt realy genuine but the bit I liked most was his talk with Kurt. I loved that Kurt didn't just forgive him but that he seemed willing to forgive or talk in the future. Thanks!

[6reen6ables6irl]

No, thank YOU! :DDD