this little boy has only the monday morning mist for best friendsi was at the local bus stop when he showed up. not waiting for a bus and not really waiting for him or anything at all, just watching the rain fall down, make that fantastic sound that it does, holding my own hand to avoid feeling detached from myself as i tend to do when the beauty
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what imagery, wow. I'm really impressed with the scope you've given this story just in the way you talk about the rain. this somehow manages to balances itself between the whimsy of a fairytale and the drama of real life and it's very, very effective and then at the same time there is a clarity here that almost seems like a new level for you. you've always written spectacularly, I just feel you have hit a new level of it. I want to say congratulations to you or something, for this piece but that sounds sort of dorky I bet. this is truly great, mehmet. ah, I'll say it anyway: congratulations.
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wow then, thank you so much
I DID! i did get it! today! and i went to the coffeehouse and started reading and i have all these fantastic images in my head i am all inspired and dizzy. so thank you. and your writing is really great. i love it. i'll critique it more later for you.
xo
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thank you, that means a lot.
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i love your writings.
im linking you to my blog.
<3 me
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that or addictions. i thought about taking up smoking, but it costs less to be neurotic and caught up in everything. and then you can just let them shake, if you have nothing to do with your hands.
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it's totally fine. thank you
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