The Hands of a Soldier (Roy Mustang/Jean Havoc; the palms of his two black hands)

[theladyfeylene]

Title: The Hands of a Soldier
Character(s): Roy Mustang/Jean Havoc
Rating: PG-13
Prompt: the palms of his two black hands
Word Count: 1,200
Summary: A soldier wasn't a soldier without a weapon - it didn't matter what that weapon was. It was all the same, in the end.
Author's Notes: Dark themes, contains full series spoilers.

Comments

[etrangere]

woaw. You write emotions so beautifully. This is quite powerful.

[theladyfeylene]

Thank you, very much!

[ceasefire]

Gorgeous, once again. My friend told me you were an extremely talented writer when you first claimed here and I'm glad to see she's right. ^_^ Loved it!

I just caught one thing I think is a mistake... "and the un dangling between his thighs". Should it be gun? ^_^;;

Other than that one little mistake, I loved this.

[theladyfeylene]

Thank you, so much! Oh, wow, thank you! *blushes* I wanted to try something different than what I usually write, and the Roy/Havoc pairing is one that has interested me for a while but I hadn't quite worked up to writing yet. And being a huge admirer of your writing, your feedback is so much appreciated that I can't even put it into words.

Gah! Yes! Thank you! *runs to fix* Damn those little titchy typos... :D

[cornerofmadness]

very nicely done. Love the two differing points of view and the tenderness runnign through it

[theladyfeylene]

Thank you, very much! I'm so glad you liked it!

[havocmangawip]

“Both.” Jean pressed a kiss to Roy’s cheekbone, squeezing his hand. He let the moment spin out, wind down, fade away. “Now how about we quit with the doom and gloom and have some grub?”

So perfect, I don't even know EXACTLY why I love that bit, but I LOVE it.

[theladyfeylene]

Eee, thank you! I'm so glad! *bounces*

[anat_astarte]

I love this too!!!! This was a very touching moment between them and it was captured beautifully.

[theladyfeylene]

Thank you! I'm really glad all the emotion came through. :D