Sorry

[wrenifer]

Ok if someone here writes this story I'm really really sorry. But I have been reading this story over at UR.org and it just pisses me off. Please read it and tell me what you think. Its called The Snogging Game here is the link. http://unknowableroom.org/902/1Read more... )

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[torch_light]

eek.
I had to force myself to keep reading after the first chapter...
“Naturally, I’m in,” Adella answered, after a few moments of silence. “I mean, let’s face it. I’ve been Hogwart's resident slut since fourth year. It’s not like you're asking for that much. Plus, I’ve never wanted to out-whore Black more before in my entire life."
Who would call themselves a slut, like that? And 'wanting to out-whore'.... ???
And LILY KISSING SNAPE for SEVEN MINUTES?! Er... how about, NO!
kill me now..... no, actually, where are the knitting needles!?

[wrenifer]

Thanks for trying. I could not suffer alone. I needed to inflict this on has many people as I could.

Oh Dear...No, Just No

[underthepen]

I couldn't make it past the rules.
I tried to, I really did! But it's like when you are out to eat and you've ordered some wreck like an extra-spiced up gyro meat salad, and you want to eat it...but...you...just...can't!
What a lousy premise for a story--ah yes, let's whore ourselves out and see what happens? You know what they say about love right? Nothing makes it bloom faster than...whoring...
You see, it's just not right.
And what girl, in her right mind, would ever sign a peice of paper, pledging to smack gobs with fifty people for seven minutes each, all for the sake of making a boy leave her alone? Isn't that a bit...I dunno--INSANE? Doesn't she know how many minutes of un-needed gob-smacking that totals out to? She's just wasted 350 minutes of her life! And multiply that times the whole "team"! That's at least 1,050 minutes of mindless, needless, pointless, disgusting smackery!
It's just...Aaah!

Re: Oh Dear...No, Just No

[wrenifer]

I'm so sorry I infilicted that on you. Are you going to be ok? Such a bad story. I hope the author never comes here and sees what we wrote.

Re: Oh Dear...No, Just No

[underthepen]

I'll be all right...after the heavy drinking and pharmaceuticals, of course. To be sure, I was possibly a bit harsh.

Re: Oh Dear...No, Just No

[ghostofbambi]

You weren't harsh in the slightest. I hope the author decapitates herself.

Maybe that was a bit harsh...

[anonymous]

erm... well full marks for originality...
I didnt read past chapter 2, just becuase I realy didnt like it. It iritatated me, just because it was so... shallow and unrealistic, in the story line and the characters.
(ang*)

[wrenifer]

Well thanks for trying. That is all I can ask.

[ghostofbambi]

I couldn't read it. I read the rules and such, but when I got to the name 'Adella Cortez' I had to stop. I think I vomited in my mouth a bit.Are we honestly expected to believe that James would actually try to make Lily snog as many boys a possible? That doesn't tell me that he likes her very much... and calling her a slut! A slut!

That has to be one of the finest specimens of shit I have ever seen. Full marks, wrenifer.

Ohmegee.... this fic is so bad....

[pramanick]

bleh urgh nasty gross and just ewwwwwwwwwwwwwww
who writes about things like that. personally, i think they're compensating for something...

ewwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww