*Waves* Hello, all, I’m Laura. I just found this community a few weeks ago, realized I knew a whole bunch of the members, decided it was undignified to lurk, and joined. Hurrah
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Ooooh, a sporking! Thank you so much, Laura! (Welcome, btw.)
I had fun reading this. Loved some of your lines:
This was not happening. This could not be happening. but all to clearly, it was. Readers braced themselves for the blow; MST-ers cracked their knuckles in anticipation; the author leaned back to wait for the reviews; Somewhere, JKR writhed in agony. The fic had begun. Lily Evans woke up in a panic.
LOL! (But what is MST?)
“stop rubbing my eyes, Jenny!”
LOL!
And several other lines... And Remus having a book... And the extras/prefects... *grin*
One bold tag must have escaped you somewhere near the end, though.
Whoops! Thanks for that. I'll fix that now... A MST is a style of parody where the characters respond to the fic in a certain style that was developed for a TV show. This isn't really a MST, since my characters aren't responding correctly, but it was close, so. Thanks !
“Filch” piped in Remus over his book. “I have a book.” Remus commented, “ a book. This means I am the smart one. I am also shy and boring,” he continued, looking more unhappy, “and I am most likely wearing a sweater. But I am Smart.”
Icon love + Bashing love= You love. *squish* Welcome, and thank you for the laugh.
The re write was brilliant the the sporking was hilariously funny.
hahahaha i was laughing the entire time.
“there’s a sex scene?” an extra asked fearfully.
“oh yes,” Lilly told her, “it will be our first time, but it will be fantastic! But I’ll probably cry initially, and James will ask me if I’m sure about this, but since I love him, I’ll say yes…”
“as long as James doesn’t cry,” someone muttered in the back.
“But how can they allow such a thing?” a particularly naive extra/prefect asked in horror.
Lilly shook her head grimly. “no one reviews things honestly anymore. Fewer and fewer people are writing in order to improve their writing. It’s all a big ego trip, now. I fear for the future.”
hahahah, omg this is so true...I love how u put it in there. Its one of my pet peeves..
”…You mean late?” Peter asked.
“Shut it, you” Remus barked, “keep your head down, or the author might decide to cut you out of the story altogether.”
“just don’t say or do anything” James advised. This was
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Priceless. I absolutely loved your comments especially the shoulder comment and you reactions to the author's... lack of grammer and punctuation. That fic made my night. =P
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I had fun reading this. Loved some of your lines:
This was not happening. This could not be happening. but all to clearly, it was. Readers braced themselves for the blow; MST-ers cracked their knuckles in anticipation; the author leaned back to wait for the reviews; Somewhere, JKR writhed in agony. The fic had begun. Lily Evans woke up in a panic.
LOL! (But what is MST?)
“stop rubbing my eyes, Jenny!”
LOL!
And several other lines... And Remus having a book... And the extras/prefects... *grin*
One bold tag must have escaped you somewhere near the end, though.
Again, thank you for an amusing read :)
See ya,
Anna.
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See ya,
Anna.
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Icon love + Bashing love= You love.
*squish*
Welcome, and thank you for the laugh.
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Thanks!
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That was really funny. Nice sporking XD.
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OMG I CANT STOP LAUGHING!
The re write was brilliant the the sporking was hilariously funny.
hahahaha i was laughing the entire time.
“there’s a sex scene?” an extra asked fearfully.
“oh yes,” Lilly told her, “it will be our first time, but it will be fantastic! But I’ll probably cry initially, and James will ask me if I’m sure about this, but since I love him, I’ll say yes…”
“as long as James doesn’t cry,” someone muttered in the back.
“But how can they allow such a thing?” a particularly naive extra/prefect asked in horror.
Lilly shook her head grimly. “no one reviews things honestly anymore. Fewer and fewer people are writing in order to improve their writing. It’s all a big ego trip, now. I fear for the future.”
hahahah, omg this is so true...I love how u put it in there. Its one of my pet peeves..
”…You mean late?” Peter asked.
“Shut it, you” Remus barked, “keep your head down, or the author might decide to cut you out of the story altogether.”
“just don’t say or do anything” James advised. This was ( ... )
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