*Waves* Hello, all, I’m Laura. I just found this community a few weeks ago, realized I knew a whole bunch of the members, decided it was undignified to lurk, and joined. Hurrah
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“I have a book.” Remus commented, “ a book. This means I am the smart one. I am also shy and boring,” he continued, looking more unhappy, “and I am most likely wearing a sweater. But I am Smart.” LOL.
I love how you pointed out that Remus and Peter end up as stereotypes. Or that Peter gets cut out all together.
“At least,” Jenny said in a voice of barely controlled fury, “I’ve got curves in all the right places!”
“Hah! You see this?” Lilly demanded, grabbing a chunck of hair, “these are flowing, fire-hued locks. Incidentally, my hair smells like sangria. And these,” She continued furiously, gesturing at her eyes, “are emerald orbs. Beat that, beeotch!”
Bits like that just win. Win at life, win the internet, win Thursdays. :D
There are a lot of mechanical errors in your sporking, though--not capitalizing the beginnings of your sentences, writing "gapped" for "gaped," and writing "Lilly" for "Lily" throughout. Dropping the ball with your own writing does, well, rather detract in a sporking. This was a brilliant MST, but it would be better if you made the corrections.
does anyone know the name of this really good lily and james story where james uses polyjuice to be remus and goes on patrols with lily. Lily also makes penny wishes and does some other quirky things.. It 's been bugging me forever that I can't find the story and I was wondering if any of you guys knew
I think I know the story you're talking about, but I'd try looking for it in a community likelilyandjames, since this isn't really the place. :P I can't be bothered to put a link in, I'm afraid, but if you search for it or check my (or anyone's here,really) profile you can find it.
i know this isn't the place, and I am sorry, but I I've been trying to find this story forever, so I was willing to try... Um.. I still can't find it but thanks
This was great. It was hilarious and definetly made my day. So thankyou =]. My favorite parts were the random orefect extras and the begining fight with Jenny.
i think this is one of my favourite sporks, because you have the characters sporking their canon-raped selves... thanks for such a hillarious read!!! so much fun! i especially think you made a valid point about Peter, poor dear. Its not his fault he turned out bad! lol great work, you definitely have a talent!
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LOL.
I love how you pointed out that Remus and Peter end up as stereotypes. Or that Peter gets cut out all together.
And you OC/Lily fight was awesome.
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“Hah! You see this?” Lilly demanded, grabbing a chunck of hair, “these are flowing, fire-hued locks. Incidentally, my hair smells like sangria. And these,” She continued furiously, gesturing at her eyes, “are emerald orbs. Beat that, beeotch!”
Bits like that just win. Win at life, win the internet, win Thursdays. :D
There are a lot of mechanical errors in your sporking, though--not capitalizing the beginnings of your sentences, writing "gapped" for "gaped," and writing "Lilly" for "Lily" throughout. Dropping the ball with your own writing does, well, rather detract in a sporking. This was a brilliant MST, but it would be better if you made the corrections.
(But the fire-hued locks still win.)
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*hides* I went back through it, and Yikes! Thank you for letting me know. I'll definitely fix that. :D
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