TVXQ - First Kisses collection #1. Jaejoong/Changmin

[7writing]

Title: First Kisses collection #1. Jaejoong/Changmin
Pairing: Jaejoong/Changmin
Rating: PG
Genre: general?
Summary: Jaejoong thinks he's got Changmin figured out.
Note: #1 in the collection, written for Mika, because I had to be an idiot and plan a month away. The collection will grow upcoming days, Request of a Lover is not dead. Check my post on

Comments

[829mika]

First of all, you're a really big sweetheart (but you know that already hah) for writing things for me<3
(and did you really have to typ down the 'plan a month away' part? rub it in will ya? haha)

So some feedback hm? i love how you didn't make it overly sappy/corny-ish but really tried to capture the competitiveness. And i like how you really got into describing what their personality's are like (or, your interpretation through what you see/know about them)
Also "Changmin is very vibrant, albeit in hues of dark blacks and blues" i love that description, i think it's very fitting.

And good job! on writing something other than your OTP's~ because i know how difficult/wierd *cough*jaechun*cough* you thought it would be writing something so different.

[7writing]

Haha, not so much a sweetheart. Just making up for a shitload of fics I promised you in the past but never got round to completing yet. :) didn't want to give you the feeling I'd leave you empty-handed and all.

Changmin's a tough nut to crack, but I adore him so much. Especially trying to view him through Jaejoong's eyes - it's a good thing there aren't many people like Jaejoong, or at least like the way I portray him in stories.

Writing different couples from my OTPs is really, really difficult. I'm going to up the jaechun now, for lols and giggles, because I sure as hell can't write jaechun.

[queenlucifer]

OMFG
this is so hot n so well written

[valzante]

Oh~ I love this so much. ;3; ♡ Definitely one of my favorite soulfighter fics!