MONSTER - Chapter I

Feb 22, 2015 14:03



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lilisan31 February 22 2015, 13:05:54 UTC
*Save my place*

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801rabu February 22 2015, 13:09:11 UTC
Hahahaha

Are you the fucking Flash or something?!

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lilisan31 February 22 2015, 13:39:51 UTC
You can call me "Stalker-chan" ~
I really love your story Sunny! Between Nino and this creepy person it's like a game of the cat and the mouse. I have so much questions but i know you will keep your mouth closed right~ soooooo I look forward the next :D They're two lonely soul, maybe they can appreciate the company of each other.. And more~
Oh! Also what is a "Mujina"? A Monster? It is a Spanish word?
Thanks you for sharing Sunny ~
XOXO ❤️❤️

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801rabu February 25 2015, 09:25:36 UTC
Haaaai... they've always been so alone after all.

This time I won't disappoint you ^.^ it will be "some sort of" happy Ohmiya ending, buahahahahaha.

Yer a rainbow. Muxu!

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naoki_hikari February 22 2015, 15:00:55 UTC
Eto.. do you mean Kaijyuu? As in monster? What's Mujina? *confused*

Decided to stick around for a while. I just hope this won't end in character death or something. Happy end Ohmiya please? *puppy eyes*

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801rabu February 22 2015, 15:56:30 UTC
Hahaha. I also hate that kind of endings so don't you worry ^.^

Expect some nasty angst before the end though ; D The Mujina is a creature from Japanese foklore, I'll explain more in the next chapter.

Thank you for reading!

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atenea005 February 22 2015, 15:59:58 UTC
Mujina? well I'll wait for next

thank you for update!

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801rabu February 25 2015, 09:00:49 UTC
Thanks for reading cutie!

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arasukishi February 22 2015, 17:54:05 UTC
I love the setting of this story! Could it perhaps be related to the infamous Minamata disease that left so many people sick? And is our monster here... one of them?

Please post the next part soon! And thank you so much for uploading this! I love horror~

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801rabu February 22 2015, 19:12:45 UTC
BINGO! Minamata disaster has a big importance in the story, "our monster" though... Well, I'm always about to reveal too much about the plot, so I'll leave it there ^.^

I'm curious, did you know about the disease beforehand? I had to search for a disaster that would fit here, I honestly had never heard about it before writing this.

So glad you like the story so far, thank you so much for reading!

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arasukishi February 23 2015, 07:06:24 UTC
I think I came across it once or twice in some English-language books about Japanese history. Given the scope of the disaster, I'm honestly quite surprised that it isn't as talked about as it should be - after all, it's a landmark case for toxic waste management - but this IS the Japanese government we're talking about. They tend to downplay too much. :P

Thanks so much for your story as well! :)

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ninokazumiya February 22 2015, 23:53:53 UTC
i have so Many questions in my head now, but i will save it for later.. for now just let me tell u! u have such a nice writing styles!! it was so nice..and this story sounds promising enough! cant wait for the 2nd chapter...weee.. update quickly! lol

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801rabu February 25 2015, 09:02:49 UTC
Thank you soooo much for these kind words ^.^

Hope to update next chap by Sunday ; )

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