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shaorankun December 23 2008, 11:33:59 UTC
EXTREME SEX TIPS

haha I love how songs can influence someone's work etc etc

anyways
good job on the prompt 8D

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thecommawhore December 23 2008, 14:30:12 UTC
*giggles* Yep! Personally I'd accept EXTREME sex tips from Ryohei, just for the lulz, but apparently Yamamoto doesn't think the same way. XD

Thanks!! I'm so glad you think I did well 8D *was really nervous*

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hakutenshi December 23 2008, 12:09:21 UTC
BWAHAHAHAHAHA!!

Sorry, but this is totally awesome!!!

“Jesus fucking Christ on a fucking Pogo stick! Are you trying to kill me, dickwad?”
This totally killed me XDDD

Along with the EXTREME SEX TIPPPPPSS!! and the fuck's rising up into the air XD

this was really great, thank you for writing :D :D :D

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thecommawhore December 23 2008, 14:35:18 UTC
Ahahaha I had so much fun with Gokudera's 'creative' mouth (take that however you wish XDD) That line had me giggling for a good five minutes too.

And can't you just SEE Ryohei taking them both aside, all serious, and then offering them some... EXTREME SEX TIPS! =D I love that guy. So much.

Thanks so much for your great comment, I'm so happy people liked it!! I was really nervous to post it at first but I'm very glad I did <3

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hakutenshi December 23 2008, 15:00:23 UTC
hahaha XD okay, I WILL THINK OF THIS as TALKING now XD

oh yes, the strange thing is, I REALLY can do that XD I mean.. the best would be in school like "Guys, come with me" all quietly and then ala "and then you have to do THIS TO AN EXTREME UNTIL THE OTHER ONE CUMS!!!!!" in the middle of the corridor.
I really would die of laughter XD
And I think even his sun guardian powers wouldn't help him healing afterwards because Gokudera would make him swallow a whole bunch of dynamite XD

no problem ^^ I really like it ^^
Wahh~ I wanna write like that too >.< But my english is not good enough to write every grammar thing correctly and I already got many "Look at your grammar" comments ^^"
*goes looking out for a beta again~~*

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thecommawhore December 28 2008, 19:30:28 UTC
OMG YES XDD And Yamamoto would just be laughing his head off, of course. I'd feel really bad for Kyoko, though - who's gonna tell her why her brother is in the hospital with third-degree burns all over him? XD

And I know you've probably heard this before, but practice makes perfect! And a beta really helps, too - I'm looking for one as well, lol. But do keep trying! =D

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allyoucaneater December 23 2008, 12:47:56 UTC
Thank god Hibari didnt hear/saw anything... nor is he somewhere near in the first place...
He's going to be pissed someone did something immoral on HIS Namimori High roof though...

btw, awesome job on the prompt, love Gokudera's swearing habit, and Yamamoto's.. Yamamoto-ness

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thecommawhore December 23 2008, 14:32:19 UTC
You know what? I was thinking about Hibari the whole time I was writing this. But then I thought, if he made a cameo it would end in both of them dying, and that would kind of detract from the happy, fluffy mood. XD

EXTREME thanks!! Oh, I'm so happy people liked it =D I'm glad I could be IC, too, this is my first time writing these kiddies after all.

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thecommawhore December 28 2008, 19:25:24 UTC
You're very welcome! And thank you for commenting =D I'm so glad you liked it! I needed some non-angsty stuff too, haha. <3

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xynnia December 26 2008, 00:16:01 UTC
Hehe, nice, very nice. :3 I wish I could know what advice Yamamoto got given by that guy xD

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thecommawhore December 28 2008, 19:26:32 UTC
Hee, thanks! =D Yeah, me too, haha! Though I have to wonder if it'd even be good advice XD

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