I write my life into existence

[8_tigerlily_8]

In milky grey cover of peacenight
I settle like mist over all
all even, all cool, all air
I cannot be moved, be shaken

In milky grey cover of peace night
Im a silhouette dark and striking
all stable, all finite, all see me
I cannot be swept, be forgotten

In milky grey cover of peacenight
I traipse like a girl through all parts
all forming, all moving, all

Comments

[jakedowers]

I enjoy that your current mood here is weird.
Thought this poem was great; a real representation of self. The repetition worked really well and I really liked the imagery.
The main thing though that I enjoyed is that I can't answer it, leaves me thinking, thanks for that.
Jake.

[anissa_c]

Lovely. And peaceful. I love the notion of writing my (your) life into existence. I feel like I am doing that too. It's certainly a labour of love

[mandiebulsara]

There was something so comforting about this poem, it felt angel-like and serene, but mysterious. I absolutely loved the title on so many levels.
your writing is amazing, i always enjoy it
x0
Amanda