[fanfic] Meant to Be 5

Mar 11, 2012 16:36

Fanfiction: Meant to Be - Chapter 5
Author: 9mm_meg
Characters/Pairings: USUK, Canada, plus Japan and France this chapter
Rating: M overall, T and a half this chapter
Warnings: language, slight naughtiness, Francis in general
Summary: Sequel to Let It Mean Something. Alfred's got the second chance he never dared to dream of, but no matter how in love he ( Read more... )

multipart, usuk, fic, hetalia

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j_sasunaru_c March 12 2012, 01:05:41 UTC
I seriously laugh out loud over Francis' woes! It's just, too funny! To mistaken Alfred as Matthew, you don't get that often, but here he is, being shocked over the notion of Matthew getting on it with Arthur, hahaha! And after that, wanting to touch Alfred, trololol!

And the Facebook incident is really hilarious, too! I remember that dorky Western band singing a song called Facebook Official, lmao! But Alfred's worries are sort of legit, hahahha! And Kiku's smooth way of saying about his sexual preference, lol! I just love insecure!Alfred so much! Because it's cute and he becomes more possessive, hahahah!

Thank you so much for the beautiful chapter! I am so happy to read this!

/also, I get excited whenever I see you reply to my comments, it means there's a chapter coming! HAHAHAAH! XDDDDDDDD

PS I really want Francis to try to attempt to, you know, touch Alfred because of his similarities with Matthew and Arthur going berserk. LOL! It's really funny!

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9mm_meg March 12 2012, 01:21:26 UTC
Alright, first of all, no Chapter 6 is not going up yet (I've just barely started it actually), but I thought I'd reply since I happened to be sitting here writing still... lol

I like to save replying to comments until I'm finished with the chapter I'm working on, 'cause it kinda works like a motivator for me. As in, "hoshit, I need to reply to these people, so I need to hurry and finish this!" It also works well for the purpose you mentioned. Hahaha...

Yeah, I figure if Matt's the only twin Francis has seen, when he sees Alfred he's gonna automatically assume it's his sweet Mathieu. And hell, he's Francis. If he can't have one, might as well grope the other. At least Al's gay?

Thank you, rl, for silly fic ideas... haha.

Well, I'm thrilled that you enjoyed it, and I'll be sure to comment again once Chapter 6 is ready so you don't get to miss out on being excited XD

(Now to get past the first sentence...)

PS I'm sure there'll be plenty of opportunity for Francis to get a little touchy with Al...

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9mm_meg March 25 2012, 18:54:00 UTC
As promised, here's your Next Chapter is Up comment. :D

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xolavander March 12 2012, 02:25:39 UTC
Francis, you overly dramatic frog. Why must you ruin their moment! But seriously, you mistook Alfred as Matthew. That was hilarious!

I love the part where Alfred and Arthur made it official. I just.. I really do. /sob

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9mm_meg March 25 2012, 18:55:58 UTC
Just 'cause that's what Francis does... lol.

Hee. I'm glad you liked it!

(Btw, Chapter 6 is up now, too!)

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kasumicc March 12 2012, 03:40:48 UTC
That was cute :D And there's some interesting development in there, as far as Francis is concerned...and I'd be jealous as well, poor Alfred ^^'

Looking forward to the next chapter!

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9mm_meg March 25 2012, 18:56:46 UTC
Aw, I'm glad you think so. Thanks!

And Chapter 6 is officially up, so enjoy!

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ubermidget March 12 2012, 20:54:56 UTC
Alfred babbling over the phone to Arthur when he's nervous was so adorable and funny! Arthur being a minx and and then being righteously angry at Francis was brilliant too. My most favourite line had to be this: “Pity he didn’t trample your nether bits, too.” Looking forward to the next chapter, I like where this new plot development is going! :D

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9mm_meg March 25 2012, 19:00:19 UTC
Yeah, he's a bit of a rambler. It's kind of unstoppable. Lol. And I'm particularly fond of that one too ^_^

Thanks for reading, and Chapter 6 is totally up now!

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ren_chan146 March 12 2012, 22:02:17 UTC
I knew it. I knew that Francis was trying to woo Matthew. It's so fitting. XD Just hope for the sake of all the people in your story that he'll give in one day so that Francis can stop bothering everyone.^^
This chapter was very funny and adorable. I laughed so hard at the part where Alfred pinches himself to see if it's real or not. Just brilliant. XD I don't mind in the least that your chapters are getting longer by the way.

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9mm_meg March 25 2012, 19:04:10 UTC
Haha. Yeah, Mattie's gonna have to sort that one out for everyone's sake eventually.

Thanks so much! I'm glad you liked it, and jsyk, Chapter 6 is officially up now <3

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