This is the first time I'm playing Loz, or someone like him. If you have any comments, complaints, suggestions, any sort of crit at all, I urge you to share with me. Anonymous commenting is on, IP logging is off. Comments are screened, but I doubt I'll have needed it anyway. Please, help me to improve and continue to play him well.

You can shock me all you want to, I'm not gonna report anything to you! No matter how hard you try, you'll never get me to say anything! Everyone will forget all about me and what my voice sounds like, and I'll like it like that! That way I can just ride around and kill everything I want and break things and nobody will ever bother me, or lie to me ( Read more... )

[BZZZZZT]

rrrrrRRRRAAAUGH!!

[Loz chucks his communicator against the wall as hard as he can. The camera clicks on when it hits the wall and ricochets, bouncing off of Loz's skull in all of a second with a hollow *THUNK*]

Uut-- HEY!

[He glares down at the communicator, on the floor in front of his feet where he sits up against the wall.]

Stupid phone. ( Read more... )

[The audio is filled with thrashing and crashing- screaming, breaking, ear-splitting slams as the communicator is beaten against anything and everything Loz takes a swing at or throws. Feel free to notice a disturbance... His rampage is only heightened by the fact that the communicator had been shocking him, though in his situation, he does ( Read more... )

[The audio turns on to shrieking and savage sounds, along with Loz's grunting and the sickening crack of bones being crunched and his fist just pounding at his assailants.]

Let go of my pants, let go of my-- HEY!! YOU TORE MY PANTS!! Get off my clothes! You stupid--

[Hell no, Loz will not be stripped. 8| (Or eaten. Or clawed. Or bitten.) The reavers ( Read more... )

Little Washu said I'm supposed to pick up all the people on the street that got themselves beat up because they're too weak to fight anything and bring them to the hospital! So if you're laying on the ground somewhere I'm taking you to the hospital. And if there's any monsters involved I get to kill them, so don't try to ruin my fun or I'll beat ( Read more... )

Big brother should really stop running away. It wouldn't be so bad, snapping him in two would be quick. I bet it wouldn't hurt very much.

[Yes, Loz is upside down. Which means the comm is upside down. No wait- Loz seems to be dangling from a tree branch, ridiculously high off the ground- But if that's the case, shouldn't the image be right-side-up ( Read more... )

There's so much noise outside I thought it would be fun to get outside and play, too! I guess I'm supposed to be helping, right? I heard glass breaking and monsters that I never heard outside before, I bet all of you weaklings could use my help to fight them off. Don't be embarrassed, just because you can't do it alone. I'll rip all their heads off ( Read more... )

Ready or not, here we come...

Look at all these losers, Yazoo. Did they come to play with us?