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Nov 26, 2006 13:21

Title: Libera me Domine
Fandom: Fullmetal Alchemist (manga!verse)
Rating: PG-13
Word count: 1,560
Pairing: Riza/Roy
Summary: And it's as if his entire future is written out on Riza's skin.
Notes: Spoilers for chapter 61.

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c: roy, c: riza, fandom: fullmetal alchemist, pairing: riza/roy, fic

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the_sunri November 26 2006, 17:14:48 UTC
No one else commented? Strange...

I liked it a lot. You write in a really realistic style and bring high-quality text, or so I do think. Really hard to say, when almost all the English stuff I do read is in the internet. Characterization is very fine here, and the atmosphere is almost touchable.

Are you going to write more?

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_012607 November 26 2006, 22:02:20 UTC
I'm glad you liked it, and thanks for commenting!

And yes, I most certainly will be writing more. :) I just got back into the FMA manga after about ten months, so I have plenty of plot bunnies gnawing away at me.

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lil_missb November 26 2006, 17:37:42 UTC
This is a really beautiful story! I love the way you described everything.

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_012607 November 26 2006, 22:02:42 UTC
Thank you!

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belledewinter November 26 2006, 19:35:55 UTC
Ah, very nice! <3 I'm betting this is canon. Beautifully delivered. ^^

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_012607 November 26 2006, 22:03:13 UTC
Thanks. :) I was just disappointed that these parts were never shown in the manga.

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_012607 November 28 2006, 17:18:43 UTC
:)

Thanks for the feedback, and for friending me too. Always appreciated.

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evil_little_dog November 27 2006, 01:41:08 UTC
Lovely story. The end line is a killer.

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