Moonlight Over Water

[fullmetalguitar]

Title: Through the Night

Author: K-chan/Fullmetalguitar

Theme: Pulse, 3/50

Rating: T

Pairing:Touma/Suguru

Warnings: Previous sex implied and weird word choice brought on my intense boredom

Disclaimer: If it’s here, you get the point

Summary: Touma the insomniac.

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The breathing calms, sweat vanishing with a lingering kiss of salt and

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Eyes of a summer ocean gaze at hidden warm chocolate, and Touma watches his lover for a few brief content moments, pleased for once with something his actions have molded. One man-made seraph that has not fallen, a lone brushstroke sweeping across a formerly blank canvas, Suguru is his masterpiece. Regrettably, for this one such feeling cannot stay; as punishment for his unwillingly alert state the silence echoes in his ears and molecules of air tingle across his skin in silent mockery of the emptiness around him.

I love that paragraph. I love the wording. And I love you <3 Good work.

[fullmetalguitar]

Thank you! That was the part I was most unsure about, so it's a big relief to hear that ^_^ *huuuugs* It means alot to me, so thank you again. ^~^

... I know I've read something by you. O_O For the life of me I can't remember where or what though. I just know I really liked what you wrote... now it'll be bugging me.

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Lol.

Most of the stuff I've written for this comm (and my multi-part Kiro fic that NO ONE HAS REVIEWED =grr=) is on my Fanfiction account.

www.fanfiction.net/~tokasyriu

[pikachu_goddess]

wow.

Beautiful...and artistic.

wow.

EIRI-CHICK
(-_-)=~

[fullmetalguitar]

^///^ Thank you very much!

[fullmetalguitar]

Thank you, I love knowing which parts were favored more. ^__^

And also, thank you for the nitpick! I do mix those two up alot, and I appreciate when people correct me. ^^