Lonely ~ {John Maine/Mike Pelfrey}

[_____laura]

Title: Lonely
Pairing: John Maine/Mike Pelfrey with past John Maine/David Wright and implied David Wright/Jose Reyes
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: Don't know them, don't own them. It's lies, all lies.
Notes: Request fic for sheep_mambo ♥ She wanted a kind of sequal to Japan where Pelfrey finds out what happened between Maine and Wright. (POV changes with the ***

Comments

[deviliknow]

Yay, sequel kinda! ;D Those Japan fics always seem to demand follow-up. What is it about that? :p

I still love "Japan," btw. The whole Game Day scene is still one of the most fun I've read to this point in baseball slash.

letting is fingers idly trace through his hair

Pretty *_*

An arm draped across Pelfrey's torso and eyes closed, drained from the day's workout.

...More pretty *_*

*lol!* Wright isn't quick enough ;D

Pain shot through his jaw, but Pelfrey saw it as a welcome distraction.

:( But a really good visual.

I really loved the Glavine cameo. Like, what's with these kids? For serious? ;p And Mike shoving at David. The tension is building nicely!

"Ya know, baseball 'es great,"

I love how you worked the Jose dialogue. Love it! And you gotta love how perceptive Jose is. Just wonderful.

Pulse point licking always makes me wibble a little, and happy endings make me smile. This was awesome. I love your stuff :)

[_____laura]

What happens in Japan doesn't always stay in Japan ;)

♥ Thank you! I remember being so nervous about posting it because it was my first baseball fic. *lol*

*_*

I was going to use Pedro, but I thought Glavine worked better as the voice of reason. :P

Jose's got a lot going on in that head behind that pretty smile

:D Thanks you so much for all the nice feedback. ♥

[sheep_mambo]

OMG.

"I'm not the one screwing half the team."

Booyah xD. Well, not really half the team, but the person who represents half of it, mostly.

Glavine should always be in Maine/Pelf fics. It's supposed to be like that, I think. Remember when Pelf was in Florida and Glavine took him down the dugout steps? Gary and Keith were talking about how whatever they were doing was to be kept in secret just between them so no one could see. I was dying with laughter.

Whatever 'us' was.
But you know what? I think Glavine knows. (Glavine/Maddux/Smoltz=OT3).

Pelfrey looked down to his left to see Wright still holding onto his arm with one hand, having been one of the four to pull him up. He gave him a bit of a shove as he snatched his arm out of the hitter's strong grasp and returned to his locker.Pelfrey thinks Maine is a whore. Love it ♥. How many people would it actually take to pull Pelf up? Geez

[_____laura]

*lol*

He would work well in the fics. Being the older veteran in his last season, teaching the young rookie kids about pitching. Gunna miss Tommy when he's gone.

:P

It's because he's got his Davey. ;)

haha, you're very welcome! ♥

[sheep_mambo]

xD Tee hee.
I was wondering just how easy it was for Pelf to forgive Maine and why Maine felt he needed to apologize 'cause he seemed to really like it. And how did Maine tell Wright about his thing with Pelf?

[_____laura]

And how did Maine tell Wright about his thing with Pelf?

Hmmm...looks like I'm gunna have to do some more writing. I have good idea already for it so =]

[_____laura]

:D Thank you!

[_____laura]

♥ Thank you!

Haha, I can so relate to the homework thing. I thought about naming this fic "What I Do Instead of Studying For My Finals", but it didn't really fit the story line. *hehe*

let's see..
1) At least I was right about that line being Derek/Alex. =]
2) Damn, I really thought it was Andy. But I can see it being Moose too.
3) Wow, I don't think I could have been more off.
4) Got the Moose part right
5) Aw, Johnny ♥
6) *smiles at the thought of Roger falling down drunk on the streets of Huston* (sorry, lol)
7) Yes! Score one for me.
8) Hmm, yeah I can see that.
9) Scott/Kyle sex on the beach is a lovey thought ;)
10) Yes! again. So, that's two, lol.