Distance ~ {David Wright/Jose Reyes}

Feb 10, 2007 00:31

Title: Distance
Pairing: David Wright/Jose Reyes
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: Don't know them. Don't own them. I'm not making money. This only happened in my head.
Notes: My fics alway seem to have one word titles. *lol* Anyways...a little background on this one. I tried to be as accurate on things as possible. David went to the DR in mid January ( Read more... )

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x___conniieee February 10 2007, 14:34:05 UTC
Awww, I loved this! But how could Davey give in so easy!?
LOL, I guess it's kind of hard to keep up the cold shoulder with someone as hot and sweet as Jose. Still, I loved this :D I was hoping you'd write about this when I read about it a couple days ago!

“It’s not as cold as New York, that’s for sure.”

David tightened his arms around him, “Yeah, but I think we can find a way to keep warm.” - Haha, that's hot.

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_____laura February 11 2007, 03:52:45 UTC
Hehe, I just had to write about it.

Thank you so much! :)

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sheep_mambo February 10 2007, 15:08:40 UTC
Summers in NY can sometimes be even worse than winters.

The look on David’s face as he tried to figure out what she was saying had been priceless.

The whole thing was just one big "awww". The end was nice and well-rounded.

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_____laura February 11 2007, 03:53:07 UTC
Heh.

Thanks! ♥

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deviliknow February 10 2007, 16:30:14 UTC
One word titles work. They're simple and effective ;)

I saw this last night and squee'd a little, but I was way too tired to give good feedback. Hence, the delay.

I love picturing Jose in a cab going through Manhattan at night with his head on the glass. Such a pretty image :)

Indifference on David's face is something that should never happen :( He was really looking forward to that naked DR sunbathing, wasn't he?

I love the awe-struck kids. *lol!* And the fake run-down. How cute! As is David's beaming smile, because guh.

I already talked about the lips remaining unresponsive. Still say that would take a LOT of willpower on David's part :p

The "Not stupid" part was so adorable. I had a big grin on my face.

*happy sigh* They're so very sweet.

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_____laura February 11 2007, 04:05:21 UTC
Who wouldn't be looking forward to naked DR sunbathing? ;)

I just love picturing David with a group of kids like that. I can see him getting really into it.

Thank you so much! ♥

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deviliknow February 11 2007, 04:39:16 UTC
I think I've scarred myself and purplecargirl for life by picturing Jose and Don Zimmer in the DR with the naked sunbathing. Long story o_o

Oh yeah, definitely. David's such a kid person. And elderly person. And cute puppies and kittens person ;)

Did you see the Mets 2006 Record of the Year Grammy predictions on MLB.com? I can so see Jose and The Maine Event chillin' to Mary J. Blige :)

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_____laura February 11 2007, 05:53:09 UTC
Ew. *falls down*

*lol* David is just such a golden-boy.

No.. *goes and looks on mlb.com* I can't find it. *pouts*

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shellygirl814 February 10 2007, 16:55:19 UTC
Awwww, very sweet.

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_____laura February 11 2007, 04:05:50 UTC
Thanks!

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_____laura February 13 2007, 04:20:23 UTC
Hehe, he is. Thanks for reading! :)

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