Comments | _____laura: Two Eras [Part 3/3 : The People You Love] ~ {Mike Piazza/David Wright}

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Two Eras [Part 3/3 : The People You Love] ~ {Mike Piazza/David Wright}

Feb 26, 2007 01:36

Title: Two Eras [Part 3/3 : The People You Love]
Pairing: Mike Piazza/David Wright
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: Don't know them. Don't own them. I'm not making money. This only happened in my head.
General Summary: Part 1 here. Part 2 here. David's a rising star on the Mets while Mike's time on the team comes to an end. All three parts take place over ( Read more... )

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shellygirl814 February 26 2007, 19:01:38 UTC

Would *squee* be an appropriate response from a grown woman?

If so: *SQUEE*

LOVE MIKE PIAZZA...David is great too and when he's all grown up...oooh.

If not: What a great story.

Either way, I loved it and hope there is more Mike in the future.

_____laura February 28 2007, 01:09:19 UTC

I think *squee* works ;)

I don't know if I'll ever pair him up with someone from the Mets again, maybe someone from the A's if it sparks for me. I just got the itch to do these two and had to get it out of my system, *lol*

shellygirl814 February 28 2007, 01:14:26 UTC

I have a huge love for Nick Swisher, Bobby Keilty, Danny Haren, Bobby Crosby, Rich Harden, Barry Zito (I know he's a SFG now)

Gosh, if Zito hadn't left... him and Piazza... *fans self*

sheep_mambo February 26 2007, 21:27:43 UTC

You conveyed David's feelings really well, as well as his cute intimate moments with Jose. *Squee?* Yeah, I think that's about right.

♥ Loved it.

_____laura February 28 2007, 01:10:42 UTC

♥ Thank you.

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_____laura February 28 2007, 01:12:58 UTC

*lol* Don't feel bad. You're guys played good.

Thank you so much :)

deviliknow February 27 2007, 18:06:59 UTC

Woo! Part three :D

Love that you incorporated Mike's heavy metal love :) And that, even at a BLS show, he's in a back room watching the end of the NLCS.

It'll be the weirdest thing to point out, but I really liked opening with David sitting on the end of the bed and tracing the bottle rim with a finger. I could picture it very well.

When Mike came, with Jose sleeping in the back room, I was like o_o! *lol!*

"Why ya smilin'?"

"Because I love you."

*_* *squishes both of them*

And your Jose speak still owns me ;D

Loved the shirt coming back in the end! And not just because of my kink for it :p He was bringing a part of Mike with him, even though their lives were both moving on without what they used to have, and that was sweet :)

"I'm from Brooklyn, dude."

*lol!*

Loved it!

_____laura February 28 2007, 01:25:20 UTC

Heavy metal always reminds me of him, just because of how it would always be his at-bat music. That little thing about watching the game though? True story. At least Wikipedia says so. If you look under "Trivia" it's the 5th thing. *lol*

I wanted to have David sitting the same way Mike was while he was watching the game and give him this nice little moment of thought.

Yay, I'm so glad you liked the end. ♥