The Missing Stair

Mar 24, 2014 18:36

I stand expectantly at the top of the stairs, one eager eye pressed against the crack between the door and its frame. The sweet smell of chicken and waffles floats up to me, the kind of incense only my grandmother can burn. Yellow morning light bleeds through the lacy curtains staining the white carpet beside the bed that has always been mine, at ( Read more... )

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lawchicky March 25 2014, 16:50:13 UTC
Aww- sometimes I wish my dreams could last so much longer so that I could enjoy the company of those I'm with in them.

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watching_ships March 25 2014, 18:26:05 UTC
beautiful, haunting piece, briley. i really enjoyed your take on the theme.

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cheshire23 March 25 2014, 23:54:09 UTC
And I cry…because the stair is always missing and I never make it down to her.

That was the perfect way to end this. Simple and sad.

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beautyofgrey March 26 2014, 01:18:05 UTC
Oh, sadness! But beautifully written. <3

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halfshellvenus March 26 2014, 05:30:20 UTC
Oh, God. The ending of this was so unexpected, but so heartfelt and gave me such a pang. It defines the earlier part of the story just perfectly.

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