LJ Idol: Topic 4

[____hejira]

“Nobody can ride your back if your back's not bent

Comments

[cheshire23]

I never started out wanting another woman’s husband in my bed.

I don't think it does, generally. It's not about that, it's about the specific person.

[____hejira]

I think that's something people forget though. It doesn't make it right, but we lose nuance sometimes in the way we see wrongdoing.

[sarcasmoqueen]

Nicely done, although you do have a couple of grammatical errors in your first paragraph that you might want to correct (waist instead of waste, and lazor instead of laser)

[____hejira]

Good eye. That's what I get for not reading this in Braille before posting. Thanks for the comment and for reading.

[kajel]

Being a woman is sticky sometimes, like the cotton candy residue that clings to your fingers long after the circus is over.

I really love this line. Well done.

[____hejira]

Thank you so much.

[beautyofgrey]

Nicely done. Life is so much more grey than it is black and white.

[snarkerdoodle]

It still feels like love, like something irresistible and honest, even if it is wrapped completely in deception.

This was an excellent line in particular. :)