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____ohgolly

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Sep 07, 2005 17:54

"clay was working one of those hot, sticky july afternoons again. the kind of afternoon that drags out a whole year, and then repeats itself over and over, until the leaves fling themselves off the trees in protest. munroe had him sweeping out back of the store. clay lifted his feet, hearing the "schtick" as they carefully extracted themselves from ( Read more... )

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hannannah September 7 2005, 18:06:46 UTC

It's good. I like it... It's the sex.x

____ohgolly September 7 2005, 18:19:34 UTC

cheers.

hannannah September 7 2005, 21:27:25 UTC

If you write a whole book and publish it really quickly I could do it for my lit coursework!x

____ohgolly September 7 2005, 21:38:17 UTC

it'll only be a short story. and i don't think you could study something so unliterary. but it'd be fantastic if you did, i'd love for someone to come up with themes and narrative techniques and stuff. as if i mean to do all that stuff. haha!

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_k80 September 7 2005, 20:49:14 UTC

did you write this? me gusta.

____ohgolly September 7 2005, 21:38:53 UTC

yeah, i did. i'm making it into a short story. watch for more parts soon.

_k80 September 7 2005, 23:33:43 UTC

i shiver with anticipation!

jagger__ September 11 2005, 08:24:25 UTC

love to the peaches, the language of munroe and the leaves. it all seemes so autumn, all dirty orange and yellow. i don't know, it's as though everyone has the potential to do something significant.. i mean, the characters seem so vivid without great explaination and you can imagine what it'd be like to follow them round for a day.

it's me.

____ohgolly September 12 2005, 19:59:59 UTC

"vivid without great explanation" is my very motive and objective for writing this short story. that's the target that i'm aiming at, my darling.

good to see you.

burnmycircuits September 11 2005, 22:41:50 UTC

you already know how much i like this and how in awe i am that you can actually do this (stories and me just form a mental block)
when things get low it would be lovely if you sent me short stories through the post and i'll return with a rosie letter of random events and thoughts projected on paper and sealed with a stamp. a bit like our emails but fun as it means post (i'm still a child with receiving things through the letter box) xx

____ohgolly September 12 2005, 20:01:07 UTC

you know when we move into our own little rooms and therefore addresses, we should do that a hella lot.

and i will make you mixtapes and include photographs and letters and little things i think you shall like. and it will be just the best.