Comments | ___paralyzed: we always argue without shoes

___paralyzed

we always argue without shoes

Mar 21, 2007 15:22

i've memorized the back of your head ( Read more... )

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cowrulez March 22 2007, 01:03:43 UTC

I appreciate them a lot. :)

___paralyzed March 22 2007, 05:46:33 UTC

aw thanks a lot. they're fucking weird and i can't believe i even posted that. i don't remember doing do haha

cowrulez March 22 2007, 18:59:57 UTC

They're not weird to me. It's hard to explain, but...you know I've tried to think of a way to word this for 5 minutes now and I just can't explain it. The way you word things is so poetic and creative. I am not creative at all and I am so envious of people who can be creative, but I guess it makes me appreciate things like that more.

"sleeping on the floor reminds me of the war
loud noises remind me of children
or was it the other way around?"

I like that part a lot. Anyway, don't think it's weird or bad or anything. I've read a lot of poetry, and yours is more interesting and intriguing than pretty much everything I've read.

___paralyzed March 24 2007, 17:22:43 UTC

I really appreciate this. It's really fucking flattering. <3

ikissedbenfolds March 22 2007, 16:20:32 UTC

I love it. It flows together so nicely.... I never post anything I write, because I sometimes feel it wouldn't make sense without music... but most of it probably doesn't make sense at all.

You should post more :)

___paralyzed March 24 2007, 17:18:45 UTC

aw thank you ladyyyy<3

you should post your writings. I'll read them.