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__chantilly

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Oct 04, 2004 16:47

( as promised, this is my short story )

Comments 13

lovelyblood666 October 4 2004, 14:39:23 UTC

Your story is awesome. At least I finally get to read it seeing as the CW teacher is a bitch lol.

<333

__chantilly October 4 2004, 15:13:40 UTC

lol. Thank you <333

brickshithouse October 4 2004, 16:00:50 UTC

I really liked the plot and the message. Some sentences could be reworked, but isn't that always the case? Very good, Emily. =)

__chantilly October 5 2004, 12:58:04 UTC

Amen to things using a revoking, but it's only my second draft, so I still have about 3-4 more to go haha.

Thanks Liz!

brickshithouse October 5 2004, 14:43:48 UTC

Yeah, it's awesome though!

__chantilly October 5 2004, 16:14:41 UTC

Thank you, m'dear. How was your birthday?

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ex_rabidglow863 October 5 2004, 11:41:01 UTC

i only read the first part so far cause i have to leave but i've always wanted guys to think that about me! like that i am glamorous in a different way and intriguing. but so far that hasn't surfaced, so oh well.

__chantilly October 5 2004, 12:58:42 UTC

OMG ME TOO. I essentially turned Trent into my dream guy, and Grace into what I want to be haha.

Of course, I will never be as cool as her. :(

ex_rabidglow863 October 5 2004, 18:04:25 UTC

haha that's what i figured

__chantilly October 6 2004, 11:32:32 UTC

hahahah wheeeeeeeee.

lnknprkcutey October 6 2004, 20:37:25 UTC

wow, u r very talented

ps: i also wish i was the girl guys look at but see the inner beauty

__chantilly October 7 2004, 11:59:07 UTC

Thank you <33333

Also, WHO DOESN'T WANT TO BE THAT GIRL.