I haven't had a good HiruMamo sexy scene in a while, so I really enjoyed this.
You had a pretty good build up, with Mamori. I like the description of Hiruma's eyes and how she couldn't quiet read him.
I will have to say that Hiruma's not exactly cannon in the sense that he's not 5'9" (that's what he actually is in the series). But for this, it made sense.
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You had a pretty good build up, with Mamori. I like the description of Hiruma's eyes and how she couldn't quiet read him.
I will have to say that Hiruma's not exactly cannon in the sense that he's not 5'9" (that's what he actually is in the series). But for this, it made sense.
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classes come first. i'm actually writing part two between my classes right now. :P
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acne and birth control pills? does it work like that?
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I liked how Mamori more and more lost control in Hiruma vicinity.
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