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Sep 19, 2005 20:53

This clarity shall reveal
That, shielded by clouds and haze
Finally, we will get a feel
For what we've lacked for days

Back into the water it goes,
Those swirls of fog and mist
Slithering into wells,
It travels with a hiss

Gone may be the blankets,
But what lays underneath?
The sun, accompanied by trumpets,
With shadows, laying in defeat.

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lost_in_love04 September 20 2005, 05:09:33 UTC
thats soo good!
ah yes, freshman seminar serves a great place to write
I would know my notebook is not as organized as ppl would think
hehe


happy almost bday!!!
u didnt tell me!
I would have baked u something....hmph...
I'll make you a card

-saba

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youdontcare37 September 20 2005, 18:12:52 UTC
i love it! and i'm sorry i missed your b day. i've been feeling rather bad lately. i love you Claire! and yeah freshman seminar is sooooooooo gay!

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__leperousfaces September 21 2005, 05:14:16 UTC
Oh it's okay we all have our bad days. I love you too!

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__leperousfaces September 21 2005, 05:13:51 UTC
Haha, thanks =)
Aww it's okay you don't have to
Much love

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oh wow black_booty October 2 2005, 19:47:41 UTC
that is such an amazing poem! I can't believe you wrote that! That could be published or something!

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