My positive imput: Good voice-over with background shots. Seems to be scripted well. Good camera shots (You finally found a camera that worked??? Which was it?). Nice distrubution of shots.
Other comments (my opinion): Beginning music with VO didn't work so well. Some interview shot lasted too long. Should superimpose names during interviews. Sound wasn't so good on some of the interviews (seems that it echoed in the room too much).
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Other comments (my opinion): Beginning music with VO didn't work so well. Some interview shot lasted too long. Should superimpose names during interviews. Sound wasn't so good on some of the interviews (seems that it echoed in the room too much).
And one more thing... WHO IS YONI!?!?!?
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