Each universe was perfect, a lovely snapshot of their relationships with just enough sweetness to make me want to coo at them. I adore the way you wrote Lydia, and Allison, the line about 'never being smooth enough for her' in the spy one was just resonated with Allison brilliantly.
Also the roller derby? Seriously. AMAZING. I loved Erica tossed in there too. I was so so so good.
I love all these universes. They're all packed with wonderful images, and characterizations that are subtly different across the universes, but still feel fundamentally true to the relationship. Wonderfully done.
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Each universe was perfect, a lovely snapshot of their relationships with just enough sweetness to make me want to coo at them. I adore the way you wrote Lydia, and Allison, the line about 'never being smooth enough for her' in the spy one was just resonated with Allison brilliantly.
Also the roller derby? Seriously. AMAZING. I loved Erica tossed in there too. I was so so so good.
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