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fic: When My Sad Soul Forgot Its Pride - Chapter One

Mar 24, 2009 02:00

Summary: Georgina, Chuck/Blair. Post-finale, Georgina remains in the aftermath, and in the calm manages to reignite Chuck and Blair's dwindling relationship--if only to watch its final destruction ( Read more... )

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cynicalshadows March 24 2009, 06:18:10 UTC

Okay I am so intrigued!!! I want to find out what the picture Blair and Chuck took was of! And bad Chuck for sleeping with Georgina...again! *facepalm* Go back to Blair boy!!! :D I did like that he wanted her to remain asleep so he could pretend it was Blair. Wrong, but romantic. Or maybe I am just messed up! LOL! I can't wait for more.

_airbear_ March 25 2009, 05:38:42 UTC

YAY for intrigued! Is it bad that I don't plan on explaining the picture though? I don't want to leave you unsatisfied, but my intrigue I want to save exclusively for Chuck/Georgie/Blair. I think you might like the next chapter and the clues and questions it raises. I hope I hope I hope. It should be up tomorrow.

And LOL he totally should go back to Blair! I wonder why he isn't....;)

And I agree, I think it's romantic, in a sad sort of way. It's not wrong. I'm glad you like it so far. It makes my day!

it_was_enough March 24 2009, 08:37:29 UTC

this is soo good!

_airbear_ March 25 2009, 05:39:02 UTC

thanks so much! I hope you stick with it. :)

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_airbear_ March 25 2009, 05:46:58 UTC

Dude. Just...dude. I feel like I need to express my love of your stellar reviews with a Dan/Nate type man hug, because that's all that can explain it. Bromance may be the only way.

And LOL Blair is Seth Cohen? I loved his whole stealth rambling/obsession. Aww now I miss him. :(

And yay for physicality. I am so glad you feel that way, and that I write Chuck well. Can I confess that when I initially entered the GG fandom world, I literally consciously had a thought!fight in my head about CB fiction and that I thought it was impossible to write Chuck or Blair. True story.

And I agree, Georgina IS black coffee with the bitter sugar blend aftertaste. Now when I drink that I'm going to taste Georgie and that is just....strange.

I also like the lines you've picked out. I approve. I love writing Jesus!G. I'm definitely going to hell for having her foreplay talk be about him. WTF.

fatal_flower March 24 2009, 23:36:48 UTC

Intriguing start! You have the tone down for these characters flawlessly.

_airbear_ March 25 2009, 05:40:26 UTC

Thanks so much. I'm glad it started well and began with the intrigue, it's what I'm trying to go for.

And as for tone, thank you SO much! I'm writing Georgie differently than most, but I'm trying desperately not to "change" her because I can see her exactly this way and I hope it comes across.

stormsandsins March 25 2009, 05:05:30 UTC

Another excellent chapter.

Chuck supposed he’d grown a habit for looking after lost girls with hearts of steel.

*facepalm* Go to the one who really matters, Chuck, mkay?

I love that they're dressed up in haute couture even when spying. I mean, we've seen it from those spoiler pics and also in the past, but still! Cute. They are so meant for greatness together :)

_airbear_ March 25 2009, 05:42:18 UTC

hahah LOL at the facepalm. I know, right? ^^ hence, my icon.

And I did draw on those pictures for the flashback. I had to write exactly what I imagined happening there. They looked wicked hot and like super spies, which is basically what I want to be.

I'm so so glad you like this straight away. I am planning on posting the next chapter tomorrow.