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A Stable Heart, Chapter 6

Aug 27, 2011 07:24

Title: A Stable Heart
Written By: _alicesprings
Rating: NC-17
Summary: AU. When Luke has to hide out from the Grimaldi family, taking a job as a stable hand in Dallas seems like the perfect solution. It’s too bad Luke’s new “boss” Dr. Reid Oliver is such a jerk.
Author’s Notes: This was written for the wonderful and very patient peggin for her generous donation in ( Read more... )

luke/reid, my fic

Comments 42

tldreamer August 26 2011, 21:49:21 UTC

Another wonderful chapter! I love how Luke says the word barbeque and instantly Reid ends his opposition to going out and then you recreated the bull-riding scene! Yay!

That was a good, short misunderstanding and I liked that they were able to talk about it and clear the air. And yay for bowling! That was fun!

However, in Luke's story (I laughed so hard at the quote that ran through Luke's mind when Reid asked him about what he was writing) that darned Noah! He must be stopped!!

_alicesprings August 27 2011, 12:36:24 UTC

LOL! Glad it made you laugh! Thanks for the lovely comment! :)

anna_drenxavier August 26 2011, 22:02:27 UTC

I love them together so much. They are so freakin' cute. (I wish that's how the bull riding scene had ended on the show, BTW :P). I hope Noah gets his butt kicked in Luke's story!

_alicesprings August 27 2011, 12:42:22 UTC

Thank you so much! I love them together a crazy amount! :)

shadownyc August 26 2011, 22:03:46 UTC

I just caught up with this story and I'm thoroughly enjoying it! I look forward to see how Luke and Reid face their challenges going forward. At least they've both admitted they do care about one another.

Great story!

_alicesprings August 27 2011, 12:42:52 UTC

Thank you very much! :)

casaluna85 August 26 2011, 22:19:50 UTC

Nice to find this just before I wanted to go to bed :)

I love how you managed to inculde the bull-riding scene!

Great update!

_alicesprings August 27 2011, 12:43:16 UTC

Thank you so much! :)

smoothlikebutta August 26 2011, 23:48:05 UTC

I liked how you incorporated elements/lines from the show. And I loved that their misunderstanding didn't last long.

Reid rolls his eyes. “It was one of the best days I think I’ve ever had,” he says. “Which is pathetic, to use your word, I know.”

Luke smiles again. “It’s not pathetic,” he says softly.

Awww! They are so happy and adorable together. Their dates made me grin with how much fun they were having.

Grrr! at Noah threatening Lukas and Jude.

_alicesprings August 28 2011, 09:07:07 UTC

Thank you, thank you for the delightful feedback!! :D