Stranded, Chapter 3

Dec 16, 2011 10:07

Title: Stranded
Written By: _alicesprings
Rating: NC-17
Summary: Luke and Reid are on their way to their honeymoon when their plane hits some turbulence...
Author's Notes: I wrote the first draft of this for NaNoWriMo, which was a great challenge and lots of fun! I didn’t reach the 50k word count goal, but the fic is now complete and I'll be posting a chapter a ( Read more... )

luke/reid, my fic

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smoothlikebutta December 16 2011, 03:27:19 UTC
He wonders what else he knows how to do that he doesn’t remember.

Love Reid!

Luke’s mouth wobbles slightly, and Reid can tell he’s hurt, but he tries to smile anyway, and nods his assent, then slaps his hands against his thighs and stands up, muttering something about needing the bathroom.

Aww, I felt bad for Luke here but I understand why Reid didn't want to share.

Ack! Luke doesn't have many pills left, so I hope they're found soon.

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_alicesprings December 16 2011, 21:40:43 UTC
I think Luke's body totally remembers how to love Reid! :D Thanks for commenting! :)

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nancygrew December 16 2011, 03:45:25 UTC
Great chapter! This is such an emotionally rich fic. And the suspense is very well done - will they be rescued on time? will Luke fall for Reid? will Reid trust Luke with the story of his painful recovery?

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_alicesprings December 16 2011, 21:41:30 UTC
Thank you so much! Glad you're enjoying the suspense! :)

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bluemagicrose December 16 2011, 04:52:38 UTC
So now I'm pretty worried that they won't be rescued before Luke's meds run out.

Another great chapter. That first Thanksgiving together. :(

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_alicesprings December 16 2011, 21:42:37 UTC
Thank you very much! Glad you're enjoying it! :)

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1faghag December 16 2011, 06:39:38 UTC
Now I'm crying. I'm a nervous wreck, his pills are going to run out!!!!! Reid is so sad & mourning the loss of his love. Brilliant!!!! Just brilliant!!!!!

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_alicesprings December 16 2011, 21:43:11 UTC
Aww, don't cry! Thanks for commenting! Glad you're enjoying it! :)

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smittle December 16 2011, 06:52:11 UTC
Another amazing chapter! I love the layers of stories--the story of what happened with them in Oakdale is just as interesting and surprising as what is happening on the island. The scene where Reid doesn't want to share the details of their proposal with this Luke was heartbreaking but so real and understandable. Their first Thanksgiving was incredibly moving and makes Reid's loss of his Luke that much more gut wrenching.

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_alicesprings December 16 2011, 21:43:45 UTC
Thank you so much! I'm so glad you're enjoying the layers! Yay! :)

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