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[_all_this_love_]

i think my writing gets more and more abstract.

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she'd send him red autumn leaves in white paper envelopes, but by the time he opened them, they were thin and dry and the stems would crack. it grew colder every year and her steps were quick to keep her warm and he laughed at her for wearing fuzzy scarves and jeans with ripped knees.

the city

Comments

[unlimited_life]

[tashandra]

this was really, really beautiful. i saw a lot of things while reading, that's one thing i love; imagery.

[_all_this_love_]

thanks so much, i really appreciate the feedback. i came up with the first line and just took it from there. <3. it kind of wrote itself.

[oh_marvelous]

hello. it's cherry. i bought a rename for my journal. readd me?

[_all_this_love_]

of course, lovely.

[trini_lit]

This is me. Wow, you wrote my life, lol. On another note, you're on 3 communities I'm on; I'd like to friend you if it's ok. If not, it's cool.

[_all_this_love_]

i love hearing when someone can relate to the images and emotions that i feel and write about. . . . and i'm really flattered you enjoyed this so much. thank you for the feedback, it's very appreciated. ♥ i've friended you.