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[_allergic]

Don't let anything fragile

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[commonrue]

i love this! it sounds like something i would like to say to my little sister, or to a dear friend.

Don't let anything fragile
happen to you in my town.
!!god i love this. what a first line! i love how "my town" sets up the whole tone of the poem.

i also love that a cigarette can be half drained. and the word clandestine. people should use that lovely word more :)

i would think about ending it after "we need to talk about something" but, as always, it's yours to do with as you like.

this was beautiful, thanks.

[_allergic]

thank you dear. your comment made my day brighter. i actually wrote the poem for a friend almost exactly a year ago before she was leaving to study in italy for a semester. she's a hard-core chain smoker and one of those loud-all-the-time sort of people. i have this weird love-hate relationship with her, which i feel guilty about.

this

[ilpoe]

is a beautiful poem. all i can say right now is wow, before i want to read it again. you have a way with words methinks.

-paul

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[_allergic]

thank you :)

Will there be more?

[_e_poet]

It's been so long since you've posted any poems. If you have anything new, it would be great if you would share! Do you have a new site? I hope that we can read some more of your wonderful poetry soon!