[Fic] The Death of Innocence:: Dark

[_ame_no_chikara]

Title: The Death of Innocence::Dark
by: Ame no Chikara
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Adam/Hiro
Word Count: 2,281
Notes: This is one of a set of two one shots dealing with the missing scene in the Volume 2 finale where Hiro somehow manages to get Adam in a grave and strand him there. These one shots do not correspond to one another other than the fact they

Comments

[typhon_9]

I am sooo waiting for the other half. This was amazing, and I'm totally pumped for some sweetness.

[_ame_no_chikara]

Thank you very much! I have finals starting tomorrow, but will be needing study breaks... so, I'll probably have it out by the end of next week =)

[typhon_9]

I'm eagerly waiting!

[iamsocool12345]

Wooo, wow!

Dark, yes, and I was surprised at how much I liked it! I do love Hiro very much, but tend to think of him a-sexually, I guess. XD Which is why I was doubly impressed by this!

Very good job, I'm excited to see more from you~

[_ame_no_chikara]

Thank you very much =^^= Light will be coming out sometime next week, I think. It looks like I might not go home until a couple of days after my exams are done now, so I'll have loads of time =p

[eva_rosen]

Though I don't dig non-con that much, the mental image of a drunken Kensei groping Hiro in the old Japan amuses me to no end.

The Hiro POV was ok, and he's a tough character to write. Great job!

[sunnivaixchel]

I know!!! It makes me want to giggle which is kinda scary o_0

[_ame_no_chikara]

XD I threw that line in to lighten up the mood a bit.

[_ame_no_chikara]

The next piece I do won't be noncon. I don't even know what possessed me to write this part first. Kind of gives people a twisted view of my writing =p This is my first NC-17 piece, so... Thanks.

[shaka_chan]

Oh, I love it! The darkness is deliciously twisted and lovely. And sex in a coffin? Hell yeah.

[_ame_no_chikara]

Hee-hee! Thanks! Today I was watching this Vampire Documentary and it showed some old clip from a vampire movie. It had this lady saying "I've never done it in a coffin before." I about fell off the couch laughing XD

[s8219]

Oh... wow. Not lying when you said ‘dark.’

I cannot stress that ‘wow’ hard enough. This is amazing and just very expressive. I winced several times through it. I usually tend to go into Non-con stories with a wariness of ‘this’ll prolly be OOC’ but ... not so here.

“Have you ever had sex before, carp?” - god that made me mourn Charlie and Yaeko so much. Though Charlie is always a tear-jerker for me, but... ::snuggles Hiro ‘cause has wanted to since was half-way through story:: Poor Hiro.

and just to think, all this time, I've been my own biggest inspiration in life, Takezo Kensei. - oh, ouch. The way you brought that across? Definitely ouch.

I loved this piece, I truly did. I stared all the way in horror through it and was impressed every minute.

[_ame_no_chikara]

Thank you very much! Yeah, I definitely was trying for shock and horror above all else. I was so happy when I got the Heroes Fanficiton award for non-con fic... I mean, I was shocked because I know what great Mylar non-con is written. I was very happy to se another review too! ^^;; Hehe. Thanks again so much for all your kind words @_@