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Jun 04, 2006 18:46

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wowie19 June 5 2006, 01:16:18 UTC
It sort of seems more like the beginning of a story rather than an entire one. I enjoyed reading it... I kind of hope you add something to it. It was a little awkward in places because of verb tense but I think it's pretty good.

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