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Writer's Block: Six-Word Story
Aug 24, 2008 21:42
The Tooth Fairy alone died today.
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quietthomas
August 27 2008, 01:50:29 UTC
Are you sure that shouldn't read; 'Alone, the Tooth Fairy died today' or 'The Tooth Fairy died alone today'?
I'm no syntax nazi, and am not here to 'correct' you - just wanted to find out your reasoning behind how you've phrased it.
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_aryah_
August 27 2008, 03:45:21 UTC
I typed it after being awake for almost 23hours... That's about all the reasoning I have. I think I was feeling dramatic and emo-y which is strange in it of itself.
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I'm no syntax nazi, and am not here to 'correct' you - just wanted to find out your reasoning behind how you've phrased it.
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