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[_blueice_]

i welcome the antics
adore the roofs
when you go frantic
'tis easy to spoof

far more than a jigsaw
card short of one life
my dwelling - the bricks of
The moonless still night

go nurture the feelings
let mind dismay
go send me my billing
to this lousy array

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[kitestream]

Hey, good to see you back. I've been wondering how you're doing. From the sounds of this, seems a bit snarky. Which coming from you, I consider a good thing. If you can laugh at someone, even if you're laughing at their shortcomings or stress, I'm just glad you're laughing. And yeah, always a good thing to tell the powers that be to bill you later if you're going to pay a price.

The lines "my dwelling...still night" are beautiful. Not sure I'm getting the meaning right - I'm a bit frightened that it's a reference to homelessness.