here's to Alex

Oct 20, 2006 03:06

the birds of my desire
have finished up my heart
intimacy on fire
I'm twisted from the start

I never tried risotto
I've never been to Rome
there's not a single place
That I can label "home"

but I am moving somewhere
where troubles stroll away
At least one day I'd dare
there'd be a finest day

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kitestream October 20 2006, 01:31:25 UTC
I really like the last two stanzas (not sure how the first one fits). A very whimsical approach. The lightness of the approach contrasted with the last two lines is very touching.

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_blueice_ October 20 2006, 04:44:41 UTC
a friend o'mine (Alex, actually) nudged me to write ;-) I couldn't say no
Thanks for your remarks

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