The Black Sheep

[_brit_chick_]

Title: The Black Sheep

Rating: PG

Genre: Angst--but I swear it had a happy ending!

Disclaimer: All werewolves and/or black dogs are owned by Ms. J.K. Rowling. Lucky.

Word Count: 537

Summary: Sirius is having problems dealing with disownment, and takes it out on the only person who will listen. Remus.

Comments

[withpins]

Oh, I loved this. Sirius is in so much pain, with no idea how to deal with it. And Remus is so sweet and understanding... Great characterizations of both of them.

[_brit_chick_]

Thank you so much! It's taken me many years of writing to abandon OOC-ness and actually learn to stick each character to their unique personality.

Glad you liked it!

[_brit_chick_]

haha, Isabel will kick your ass if she hears you calling me 'shubird.' lol, just a fair warning.

And you make my writing sound so deep! I just kinda thought, "grr, i'm in a crappy mood. Need to write angst." But then I got out of the crappy mood half way through and was like, "Hmm, maybe this should end with happy fluff!"

lol, there you have it. The inner workings of my writer's-mind.

[fireskies]

He wants to cry and hit his friend because hearing the truth out loud is so much harder then silently knowing it yourself.
Oh, so gorgeous! Sirius is so self-obsessed but so badly in need of someone strong to love him *coughMoonycough

[_brit_chick_]

Thank you! Sirius and his self-obsessiveness reminds me a bit of our dear Draco. I wonder what lucky boy will be the one to show him strong love *suggestive eyebrow wiggling*

[ramen_addict]

You're family's just fine with you being different."

Small typo there, but otherwise fabulous. I love how Remus's determination to keep his friends extends to doing proper friend things as well as looking the other way when they make mischief.

[_brit_chick_]

lol, i've been having so much trouble with typing lately! My fingers have a mind of their own. Thanks bunches, am correcting mistake as we speak (or, after we speak, i guess. Same difference).

Glad you liked it! I like to think that Remus' tolerance is especially for Padfoot, and if James were to call him names, a simple hex would fix it all. That's just my obsessive!slasher mind talking.

[ramen_addict]

I'm a bit of a spelling and grammar Nazi myself, so I'll probably catch any mistakes that matter. ;)

Ah, the mind of the obsessed or dedicated slasher, so willing to put the pairing before all gen!

[dude_like_tchar]

Too cute! I love it! xx

[_brit_chick_]

*grins*

Thanks so much!