first drabble

[_brit_chick_]

I'm a long time writer finally finding a good place to post. My sister raves about LiveJournal, and finally got me to get an account.

Anyways, here's my first drabble that I wrote during a converstation with said sister.

Title: Grammar Lessons

Rating: G

Disclaimer: Everything is owned by J.K. Rowling.

Word Count: 229

Summary: Sirius is on a

Comments

[danibel]

Grammarwhore!Remus is way sexy. Har har, hearing incorrect capitalization... that was a good laugh.

[danibel]

lol, thank you so much! I must partially credit Shoe Box Project for getting me hooked on Grammar Obsessed Remus.

[_brit_chick_]

wow, i didnt sign in. I'm so new at this. Anyways, yea, thanks!

[blackxlupin]

Oh yes, Grammarwhore!Remus all the way...

[javajunkie13]

Hehe! I heart this. Remus is such a grammar whore. Misusing Capitalization is Fun Liek Woah. XD
“But at least I don’t misuse punctuation marks.”

“I do not.”

I love how offended Remus is at the very idea, hehe. You are the first person I have used my 'glee' icon on, you should feel very special. Go finish that challenge so I can read it!! *pretends to be done with her own story*

[javajunkie13]

SISTER!!! Thanks for the review, and for all the loverly icons you sent me!! Oh, and i am very honored about the whole GirlFromRoswellWhosNameIDontRemeber Glee Icon.

*clown hat* *curly hair* *smiley face* <@:-)

[javajunkie13]

i am very honored

As you should be! Yeah, I had wanted to get the first review, but second's good, right? I'm glad you like the icons!! What do you think of this one? I just made it. XD Go write more, now! I'll pay you in icons. XD

[gildedmuse]

Hehe. Poor Remus. He has so little to work with yet he tries so hard to train the misbehaving puppy that is Sirius Black. I know how frustrating trying to study around annoying friends can be. *Grumble*

“Are you flustered?”

“I’d say so.”

“Then my work is done.”

One of the cutest endings ever. I can just imagine how proud Sirius is with himself that he managed to get to Remus. Well played.

[gildedmuse]

aw, thank you so much! Yes, I can just see Sirius' face now--crazy with amusment and pride. He's such a loose cannon, but we love him so!

[_brit_chick_]

lol, i'm so new. i forgot to sign in. But thanks again!

[dude_like_tchar]

“Stop using incorrect capitalization in your speech. I can hear it, don’t think I can’t hear it.”

“Why would I use Improper Capitalization?”

“There! You did it again! What have I told you about capitalization.”

“‘Capitalization is to only be used at the beginning of a sentence, or when writing a name, place, or proper noun.’”

“Very good.”

“But at least I don’t misuse punctuation marks.”

"I do not.”

“Or italics.”

This bit cracked me up!!! I love it!!!

[dude_like_tchar]

I added you btw! Hope you dont mind!!

Kaz, xx

[_brit_chick_]

haha, glad you liked it! And thanks for adding me! I'll add you back once i'm done with this. lol, now i have 2 friends! not bad for my first day.

[dude_like_tchar]

No, not bad at all!! Lol XD

xx