Comments | _cattleya_: [Fic] Synchrony

_cattleya_

[Fic] Synchrony

Jul 19, 2005 12:35

Title: Synchrony
Rating: R.
Summary: The body preserves memories the mind lost long since.
Notes: No HBP spoilers just yet. This could fit both after PoA and during Ootp, I think. It's small, few words shy of 400... And, concrit? Yes, please.

( Synchrony )

hp fanfic, sirius, remus, r

Comments 20

sheafrotherdon July 19 2005, 15:28:04 UTC

Here by way of two_boys

This is sweet! I liked the juxtaposition of the things that seem natural and the things that seem utterly wrong - new sensations, unwelcome understanding. There are some particularly lovely phrases too: when Sirius' broken cry echoes of all the desperation and the emptiness that he is trying so hard to fight is chilling and beautiful.

_cattleya_ July 19 2005, 15:49:58 UTC

Do you know how excited I am that you liked it? I am more or less on the very edge of my chair.

Thank you so much. I'm so glad you liked my ficlet. :)

fleshdress July 19 2005, 18:57:30 UTC

That was extremely nicely done. The sensation and fleshed out stream of consciousness was very well played. And I particularly liked the phrase: this well-known stranger.

Really nice work. :)

_cattleya_ July 21 2005, 11:25:08 UTC

Woah. I'd have already been glad to receive this compliment... without you being you, as to say, one of the authors whose works I like a real lot. I've read all your entries for the Lust Month of May, and I've enjoyed them a lot! :D

Thank you so, so much. :)

hand_me_downs July 21 2005, 11:28:50 UTC

wow I loved this it's so sweet, would it be ok if I added it to my rec list?

_cattleya_ July 21 2005, 11:35:23 UTC

Of course it would! Thank you, I'm flattered! :D

rumil_minyatur July 21 2005, 15:30:43 UTC

Oh, lovely, truly lovely. I'm down-right-mystical from FA, and I just offered to beta for you. If that story is as good as this then I'm extremely glad I did.

_cattleya_ July 23 2005, 15:54:46 UTC

I've seen your reply, I'm sorry that I haven't been able to answer you before! I'm glad you liked this little piece. I'll send you a proper email with all the details tomorrow. :D

rumil_minyatur July 23 2005, 22:05:19 UTC

Yup, sure. I'm going on holiday for a week on Wednesday however, so I most likely won't be able to get it back to you until the following week, I hope that's ok!

_cattleya_ July 24 2005, 17:36:29 UTC

*sigh* I'm sorry, I didn't make it for today.

Of course it's ok! :) I hope you'll have fun on holiday. Are you going with some friends? Those are the best, I think. :D

Nice work jazzypom July 31 2005, 17:58:00 UTC

Came here via fleshdress. Glad I did

Re: Nice work _cattleya_ August 2 2005, 07:37:09 UTC

Thank you! :D It means very much to me that you liked it. :D