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_cletusthefetus

Read My Poem !

Jan 26, 2004 16:17

This is My Latest Metaphorical poem.Most of it was thought up in the shower. [long shower ( Read more... )

Comments 6

c0rruptedth0ugh January 27 2004, 00:39:05 UTC

1. Metaphorical is too big of a word for me to understand. hahah
2. it was cute! I enjoyed.
3. Ima give it a 6..it was quite good and all. but I just have a thing for non-ryming poems. Don't ask, i'm Irish!

wantsu2smile January 27 2004, 11:44:09 UTC

Haha. I don't really know your love life, but I'd say it's a good poem. : )

anonymous January 27 2004, 23:35:59 UTC

that was a real good poem...i would give it a 9....keep writin poems...im sure i would enjoy them like i did this one

bernie...

Beautiful anonymous January 30 2004, 00:06:32 UTC

I love it, honest, well worded and just wonderful...don't wory, I'll keep the path clean...the BATH too -wink-

-You know (=P)

anonymous January 30 2004, 00:07:24 UTC

by the way...its an 8.5

-again,...you know! ;)