Comments | _dc_lover_: A Place to Call Home-Part II

_dc_lover_

A Place to Call Home-Part II

Jan 22, 2006 14:08

On with the fic. :D

( A Place to Call Home-Part II )

fic: a place to call home

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serialbathera January 22 2006, 19:24:35 UTC

Very nice next piece

_dc_lover_ January 22 2006, 19:34:22 UTC

Thanks, I didn't feel I was descripitve enough, lol.

wow you're fast, I just posted this.

serialbathera January 22 2006, 19:44:37 UTC

yeah I was playing online, and when i reloaded my friends page it was there

tigre86 January 22 2006, 19:57:50 UTC

hehe still you read fast. lol

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crisbr January 24 2006, 17:48:25 UTC

Finally I'm reading your fic and I'm loving it!
You're an excellent writer, Nic... :)

My favorite piece:

They said the other’s name softly, as if it were a prayer. Hoping that they weren’t dreaming.

Now, I'll read the third part, can't wait to see how will they handle the coincidence of being at the same place again!

_dc_lover_ January 24 2006, 19:32:14 UTC

Took you long enough, hehe. ;)

Thank you so much! I'm so critical of my writing that it was hard for me not to change everything when editing these parts lol.

crisbr January 24 2006, 19:34:44 UTC

Okay, okay, shame on me... but now I'm reading! ;)

Ooh, editing is a very hard step, I hate it, cause I always have something to add, to take off, to change... lol

_dc_lover_ January 24 2006, 19:42:11 UTC

It's okay, the DJo thread moves so fast I can understand. ;)

Yeah I've forced myself to just change spelling mistakes, lol

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