Comments | _demonsblade_: 296 Ways to Seduce a Teacher: Ch. 12

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296 Ways to Seduce a Teacher: Ch. 12

Sep 17, 2005 20:04

Title: 296 Ways to Seduce a Teacher
Author: _demonsblade_
Pairing: Sirius/Remus
Rating: R
Genre: AU, romance, drama, angst, fluff, humor
Warning: Slash, mild chanslash (6-year diff.), boy/man snogging, boy/man sexual situations, mild violence, strong language
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fanfiction, 296 ways to seduce a teacher, sirius/remus, slash

Comments 106

shaggydogstail September 18 2005, 01:45:36 UTC

Oh, I really liked the part at the end. Sirius trying to keep it together but being all vulnerable just about choked me. I really wanted Remus to huggle him, although that would have led to...well, it would have cheered Sirius up anyway! ;)

_demonsblade_ September 18 2005, 01:58:05 UTC

Thanks. This is the first time we really see Sirius break down like this, and to tell you the truth I was a little nervous about writing it. I always seem to have more trouble with Sirius's personality as compared to Remus's. So I'm glad you like it.

xrated13 September 18 2005, 01:48:37 UTC

The ending was so heart-breaking i wanted to cry. Brilliant story! :)

_demonsblade_ September 18 2005, 01:58:27 UTC

Thanks. Things will get happier soon...hopefully.

xnobodyxcaresx September 18 2005, 01:58:02 UTC

Wow. I was just like thinking about when you were going to update again, and here it is! Terrific! And if I could draw I would totally offer to draw some fanart, but alas I can't draw.

lupegarou September 22 2005, 02:19:00 UTC

i LOVE your icon. yay for anti-R/T, pro-R/S, and Potterpuffs!

xnobodyxcaresx September 22 2005, 02:26:24 UTC

Yay! lol Thanks.

lieb_schaden September 18 2005, 02:11:53 UTC

Aw! This makes me want to cry. Oh and I could attempt to draw something but I'm not very good and I need to find the time. >_> If I do end up drawing someday soon, I'll let you know. XD

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_demonsblade_ September 18 2005, 04:42:37 UTC

Thanks!

And I do see what you mean about the werewolf issue. But my reasoning for putting it in the background was this: Remus has been transforming for 12+ years by the time this story takes place. I think it's gotten to the point where it doesn't rule his life anymore. I mean, it's always in the back of his mind, but he's had a lot to deal with that it makes sense it wouldn't be his sole concern, wouldn't you say? I've tried to allude subtlely to Remus's being a werewolf, like his staring ruefully at the moon as he goes to sleep. I see where I could have added more, though. Maybe I'll add in some scenes when I get the time...