Love it, very sweet, and will pop off in a mo' to read part two butttttt... I have one wee nitpicky bit that if I don't mention I will explode from: I'm fairly sure that Bellatrix is the oldest of the sisters, then Andromeda, then Narcissa. The way the family tree is described has them that way, left to right, and normally older children are on the left on trees like that. But we don't have dates in stone, so take that as you will.
Really? I just assumed that since Tonks is 7-8 years older than Harry and Bellatrix was caught with a group that included Crouch, Jr. (19 yrs old at the time), that Andromeda was the oldest. I might very well be wrong, though. It just seemed like Bellatrix and Sirius's dynamic seemed like that between rivaling/hating cousins who are close in age. But that just may well be entirely me and my weirdness talking. Oh, well.
Yeah, like I said, the way the tree is read to us is the only real indication of age. The RP group I run, we've got Bella 10 years older than Sirius, Andromeda about right between them, and Narcisa the same age as Sirius. We've also got Rabastan Lestrange the same age as Regulus, and would probably be about the same age as Crouch Junior -- so maybe that's how they all ended up together? *shrug*
That's probably why I felt I had to say something, too -- from the RP, older, domineering Bella is so strong it's hard to read her as younger than anyone :P
AHHHH!! I totally missed that you were writing these!!! I'm sitting here at a computer in the U just cracking up and people are staring at me and I dont care because this is so funny. Wonderful job, am going to go read the others.
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*skips on to part two*
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Thanks, though. :)
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That's probably why I felt I had to say something, too -- from the RP, older, domineering Bella is so strong it's hard to read her as younger than anyone :P
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I have something else I'm working on, too. Definitely will send it along when it's finished.
Thanks. :)
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Amazing. I don't usually go for dialog only but this worked.
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