Fic 01// Naruto: Final Goodbye

[_dreamworld]

Title: Final Goodbye
Author: nessa_laer /_dreamworld
Fandom: Naruto
Rating: G
Paring: Uzumaki Naruto/Uchiha Sasuke
Disclaimer: I don't own any of the Naruto's characters.

Summary: The time is nearing to its end and Naruto is thinking about someone and saying his final goodbye to them. (implied male/male relationship, one-sided SasuNaru)

Author's notes: This is

Comments

[akyore]

It's so short yet so beautifully bittersweet.
It would be even more beautiful if it's a full bloom fic.
Very nice tho. I love it.

[_dreamworld]

Thank you!

[yaoiwhore]

Mmm.
I had mixed feelings on this, not to sound like a bastard or anything.
I mean, the images you made were very beautiful, & I liked the way you discribed everything. Very Nice.
But still, I don't know. It just seemed...corny I guess? Kinda like, I just couldn't really picture that of Naruto. Maybe I got an OOC feel, yanno?
I don't know, it might have been just cause it was short, which I ain't complaining about, it just wasn't enough to explain the feelings better & to put them more in character.

>.> The writing, the words themselves are great, but I guess I just didn't like the story at all.

x.x; Really sorry.

[_dreamworld]

It's okay.

I'm not really a writer so I find it hard to write people in character. But next time I write anything I'll try to do better! *g*

Thanks for the critic!